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Where I Shouldn't Be
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Where I Shouldn't Be |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Where I Shouldn't Be It runs deeper then an ache on it's path to the soul Though it isn't a cry one can hear at night I'm not sure why my rain had a change of heart But, I saw you beneath it in a different light... I was drawn to that beach created for a moments break The place to where immense peace often lies You shined with magnitudes of glory against sea-green waters And, we danced there upon the sands of my mind... I challenged those mountains to heaven that provided us this And, absorbed all there was to that scenic view I was where I surely shouldn't be tasting this place I was breathing to the rhythm of desire being with you... I was where I shouldn't be when those waters called to me My own hearts longing like nature and it's call to the wild I visited your arms just to feel the sense of content Where I knew pleasure, like reality, wasn't allowed... I let my heart lead the way to the story never told Oh, I was really there and with moral neglect I witnessed the clouds from my back and it's awesome display With your weight against me where imagery and ecstasy connect... It was the first time I knew what real heart was My first that I'd ever been in the middle of A destination that doesn't acknowledge time Where I shouldn't be with you in my mind... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
A very soulful write, and heartfelt for me too. Though very often, one is at time's mercy, I pray that things will work out right and you will walk on fine... take care saunni *hug* mycafe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That heart, soul and mind are a real treacherous trio when it comes to love, emotions and memories. This is so well expressed Saunni! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssssss) Oh Saunni, this is so very sad but powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, I believe following your heart is the best approach in finding true love with occassionally going between the lines with mind to find the logic in how love will get there! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
mycafe, thank you for stopping and reading this.  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
ethome, yes, alot of emotion here, but it still feels good. Thanks for reading.Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Noah, thanks for reading this. I think I spend more time where I shouldn't be then where it's ok to be LOL. But, no harm done, I guess, if it's just in my mind. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
saunni~ this is such a beautiful write!! even though it posesses traces of sadness i can feel the emotions of love and happiness shining through brightly...such a wonderful heart you have. love ya. amy p.s. speak to you soon i hope. "you can't stop |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you're just letting it flow aren't you Saun??? well, don't stop now. . . keep going!! ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Amy, there is sadness, and you are right, happiness, too. Thanks for reading. John, sure am just letting it flow...sometimes hard to hold back. Thank you also for reading what I wrote. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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