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Fireside Passion
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Fireside Passion |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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The sweet aroma of gardenia So sensually fills the room Its perfume so exquisite All above me it looms The glow on your face Beside the firelight On a sheepskin rug Is where we'll spend the night On the mantle stands two glasses Beside the crystal jar Alongside is a bottle Of a nice Pinor Noir I stand here before you As you hold onto my hand You whisper to me tenderly Of what you have planned The scent of pine fills my senses From your gorgeous aftershave You know there is no chance That I am able to behave How tender you are As I respond to your touch Feelings such as these Could never be too much As you gaze down on me And our fingers interlace I'm drawn to your smile And your sensual warm face You kisses warm my soul As my heart starts beating fast Our love is here to stay For an eternity it will last You transport me to heaven As you envelop me in your arms How soon again I'll surrender To your manly charms Suetang |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I see many happy thoughts coming out in this poem. I like it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You drip of passion here Lady...loved this!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The scent of pine fills my senses From your gorgeous aftershave You know there is no chance That I am able to behave Naughty naughty.....but lovely, lovely poem... I love it when you write this way, Sue  ~ hugs for not behavingLyra |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wow, Sue! This is HOT! Absolutely on fire! Shenachie |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Woo Hoo,...awesome write!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sue You're so good at this type of writing........I always enjoy the read! I have to go take a cold shower now! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
all i can say is: Ohhh, (In my worst British accent) firey writing, Sue....better have an extinguisher ready! *wink* be well, and great feeling in this, Sue, Jeff |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is sooooooo passionately beautiful and shines with any smiles and casts with flame! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for reading this 'daring' piece of writing by me. I really like writing these and I'm glad you like reading them. All I can say to you Jeff is...."Yow Baby!!" I'm actually a huge Austin Powers fan. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Girl you have done it again - gone and got everyone on these blue pages all hot and bothered. :-) Great stuff. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
VERY passionate!! I loved it and revelled in it - thanks Sue - Paul |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is so romantic! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl, TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling heart, it’s utterly utterly fabulous, it flows with passion and sensuality. Your writing is always special, sometime it is especially so, and this is an absolute beauty. The light within streams out to caress the eye and heart of the reader. Truly this is one of your best. I love it utterly utterly love it. You really do write the most beautiful heart caresses you know? And this is exquisite. A keeper for sure. Thank you    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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