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schizosarus
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since 2002-06-18
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0 posted 2002-06-19 09:52 PM



i’d like to teach the world to sing
in perfect dissonance
cuz that’s what makes the world so real
its axis leaning thus

for when we sing the days of may
that might not be the thing
cuz not the whole world sings with us
not everywhere is Spring!

don’t think I need to teach the world
to sing as imperfection
for now that I have thought on this
let’s scream from every section!

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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2002-06-19 09:54 PM


Interesting take on the 'Coke' commercial!
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-06-19 10:49 PM


Yes very interesting poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

my3monkeytoes
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since 2002-05-11
Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze
3 posted 2002-06-19 10:55 PM


Now...that was some jam-up marketing from Coca-Cola, wasn't it?  I got thirsty just reading the title of your poem.  Neat twist, the unexpected.  Interesting thoughts.  Still, I'm thirsty!

~SM

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
4 posted 2002-06-20 12:47 PM


Yep! I'm gonna go get a coke! Thanks for the reminder.  Interesting take.

Shenachie

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