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Loves' Last Dance
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Loves' Last Dance |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Tonight is the night to end all nights, As we dance holding eachother tight, Softly you whisper, I love you so much, I begin to quiver as I feel your touch, The touch of your hand, gliding across my face, You take me to worlds beyond this place, You and I have had good memories and bad, through the years we have been happy and sad, I love you, I hate you, I am so confused, I can't live with you, nor can I live without you, So the melody of lifes' tune keeps playing in loves full bloom, But you and I have had our chance, Love has come and gone, This is Loves' last dance... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I had the last dance with you Two hearts that danced together I fell in love with you The last dance may last forever... Wonderful to read your romantic poetry again...you haven't lost a step  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful words of love and longing. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Millette, this is a sad but beautiful write, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you but I know deep down you are destined to dance in true loves bliss forever and it will be yours to hold close always! (kiss on cheek) Keep your chin up, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Millette, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You certainly are a romantic writer. I thought this was great. Balladeer is right you haven't lost your touch!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Balladeer...  ...Thank you!!!! it is great to be back!!!! Waltz is my favorite dance?You are too sweet...and kind! I love your poetry, you are so talented! Thanks for the little poem....me liked it:0 Sue...Thank You for you compliments,nice to see new poets letting their hearts shine! Noah...Thanks for the friendly kiss, I needed it! reading everyones poetry is inspiring me! you are sweet Eric..."I'll Never forget You"..."Lady Love"..your home page has some great poetry I enjoyed reading it! and to know you write songs as well! I do too! Thanks for the sweet compliments, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"But you and I we had our chance." This is the nature of love...it is not guaranteed...but it is nice to have the chance...James |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
hmmmm, I think i've had that dance recently...  Always nice to read you. Parker |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
love love love. man what would we do without it? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautifully soft and romantic. Well done. *s* Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful,.....just beautiful penned. like it a lot Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A lovely write, enjoyed the read. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
What a nice surprise to see you here again, my friend! Wonderful write, as always. Missed you! All writing comes |
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