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ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2002-06-19 06:58 PM




An ordourless flower pilfering scent,
blossoms grease your dour air.
Your legs flowing smooth for miles.
Your ruby lips a la code.

Piss on your mind's cell warden.
Magnetic visions fill the steely blue.
Outside, on endless seas,
I profile you in lines of flux; I stare.

Your defiant radiance charging,
gliding through Van Allen's belt.
Stare stolid bitch!.. I see your
flowing hair across my crushed pillows.

Aphrodite glowing sunset pink,
crys out from a cushioned rickshaw
"Hail this heaven! who opens your gate?"
my helmuted soldier stirs to action............

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

© Copyright 2002 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-06-19 07:01 PM


ethome I think those vibrations are all over you...James
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2 posted 2002-06-19 07:06 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, I just love the descriptive beauty of your words, sweet friend, this is wonderful, I love the ending especially, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-06-19 07:14 PM


Ethome, vibrations whew~now this is a side of you I haven't seen before.  Very grown up as it were.

There is nothing means more to me than
my faith, my family and my friends.

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4 posted 2002-06-19 07:24 PM


Liking this side of you.
Sandra

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5 posted 2002-06-19 07:34 PM


And now in this corner....THE NEW ETHOME!!!

Wow!  Eric...this has megawatt power..

Martie
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6 posted 2002-06-19 08:21 PM


Eric

Edgy and electric, you let it out like fire.  Nice to see you trying new on.

A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2002-06-19 08:30 PM


Hey this steamy poem should be in adult...haha! whew!!!!my monitor is steamed-up!!!!! you have a way of describing words from a different perspective...
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