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My dad Is Not Home
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My dad Is Not Home |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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My Dad is not home He left work a hour ago Me and momma worry so My Dad is not home He has not called He has not come home Where could he be He worries us Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one echoes in me. I've known this worry, and it's not a small one. Told from the child's point of view makes it even more powerful. Nan |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
Been there... what a yucky feeling... worried... angry... sad... disillusioned, sometimes. If my son could put into words the way this worry made him feel...maybe his father would be more prompt with his visitations. ~SM |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
heartfelt...... ~~ connie ~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hope things are going to be OK |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The worry just grates on you , doesn't it... When we're kids we worry about our parents and when we're parents we worry about our kids.... and then when our kids grow up and have kids of their own...we worry about our kids, our grandkids and our parents...again  ~ hugs of worryLyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lots of feelings in this very tender piece of your heart...I hope all is well...I know how terrible it feels to worry, when you just don't know what is happening but hope so much that all is OK.. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I hope your Dad returns safe and well to your family. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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