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ctowen
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0 posted 2002-06-19 01:03 PM


A bite of lip, a worries thoughts once scorned
a beat of her heart, so missed and so worn
An emptiness left to be filled by chance
a quest of her love to light new romance

A taste of mind, tripped by nights fantastic
a word if in thought ... enthusiastic
A thirst to find missing midnights there of
a search for life, happiness, and of love

A kiss to hold, gripped tight, neverending
a song to be heard, forever sending
A fulfillment just words can not express
an answer to a summer dream's request

A moments wish upon your night's torn eyes ...
a dream sets free a lost soul's heart thats wise

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

© Copyright 2002 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-06-19 03:52 PM


Enjoyed reading this!

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-06-19 07:30 PM


Seems like a happy endng here Craig, can you send me one?
Beautifully written.
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-06-19 07:42 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the Shakespeare whimsical feel of this as you truly are a modern romeo to us all! (big huggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-06-19 08:00 PM


Craig,  if I were a wise man....I would say
you are in love...reaching out...

Well written...

ctowen
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5 posted 2002-06-19 10:07 PM


Loner - thank you, glad you enjoyed.

Sandra - it can be any kind of ending, its a dream ...
         however, to have an ending you must have a
         happy beginning!
         One happy beginning on its way!!

Noah - I felt a little "Bill" in me this morning ...
       Glad you liked my Romeo's touch!

Magnus - A wise man you are ... we all hope to fall
         to such love ... perhaps its just a dream of mine.

          * Various influences helped me with this piece ...
              One such influence is Midnight Sun's Run ...
                I wish KC happiness.  


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