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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-06-19 09:51 AM


I am starving
and he said,
"Hush, now go to sleep..."
He kissed me on the forehead.
He promised me "chinese..."



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Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 688
USA
1 posted 2002-06-19 09:53 AM



I say
set the table
and use the sheets
as your napkin.

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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Ohio, USA
2 posted 2002-06-19 10:08 AM


powerfulimages in so few words - truly a masterful touch - let's go get chinese - Paul
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-06-19 10:11 AM


Serenity,
A promise is a promise, well done enjoyed.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
4 posted 2002-06-19 10:17 AM


chinese iz good
the take home kind
this was too
good stuff ms

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
5 posted 2002-06-19 10:26 AM


I ate Chinese once,
Think her name was Lin?
Then an hour later,
I was "hungry" once again!

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-06-19 10:29 AM


grinning...I should've known, I could count on YOU, toerag...lol

EXACTLY!!!

heh heh...

(er..but I DO have a way with a fortune cookie! )

love ya all...

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
7 posted 2002-06-19 10:33 AM


Ok...I'm not sure I get this one...splain it to me Lucy....
serenity blaze
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8 posted 2002-06-19 10:34 AM


er...woke up, with an APPETITE? HEH HEH?
Sven
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9 posted 2002-06-19 04:19 PM


if I get this, does it mean I win the prize???  

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bsquirrel
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10 posted 2002-06-19 10:23 PM


I'm hungry! Noodles! Egg rolls! Stuff! MSG! Whee!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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11 posted 2002-06-20 12:27 PM


shrimp fried rice...sesame chicken...and yes, of course....egg rolls...
This sounds like a nice dream, Karen...
LOL, Mr.Toe

~ Wonton hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

12 posted 2002-06-20 01:31 AM


Starving?  Don't even get me started.  Hell, at this point I'd eat the cookie and the fortune!!


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
13 posted 2002-06-20 01:48 AM


You were hungry for love and he promised you some oriental methods he found to be super effective while roaming throughout China.

How Long is a chinaman.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
14 posted 2002-06-20 06:00 AM


Chinese is good sometimes...James
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