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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-06-19 07:14 AM

Last Tear

Once more my heart
will break apart.
A bloody mess will
be all thats left.
Feeling way too
much of this pain.
I'll do my crying
in the rain.
Someday the effects
of this mess
will be through
and my broken heart
will find a way
to heal anew.
And my eyes will
shed a last tear
for you.

JamesLee
June18
DaysFrom
WayBack
InMyPast

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-06-19 07:21 AM

i like this much james.

*precious*

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-06-19 07:36 AM

I hope your current happiness shows that these feelngs pass, cause mine won't seem to.
Excellent and touching, James
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-06-19 08:54 AM

James,
Nice write, enjoyed.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2002-06-19 09:11 AM

Such a sad poem. I hope your broken heart heals, soon.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-19 08:22 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, this is so very sad, I too wish for this to be the last tear you cry of sorrow and that the true love you have now will always give you tears of happiness to cry! (sigh) This is sad but touching, swet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-06-19 08:29 PM

Ah James....why so sad sweet friend?
Good write.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2002-06-19 08:34 PM

Thanks for posting this! I can relate, I have a question for the world, Why is it that the ones who love, give, devote their whole being to someone, is always the one who gets hurt in the end! why are romantics and poets always unappreciated, betrayed, we give so much...and yet so much is never returned?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-06-22 06:43 AM

Thank you serenity, Sandra, Seymour, Smart Chick, Noah, Enchantress and Romantic Heart for responding...these are thoughts from times past...I think that heartache can accumulate and after awhile the stress becomes to much to bare...so you shed the last tear...also there comes a time when it becomes very frustrating to have an accumulation of failures...
Fortunately for me the women I am with now seems to honestly care for me...
Romantic Heart obviously all those that are willing to take a risk and give love need to make sure that they find the right one before they give too much...for some are just users and takers and do not have anything real to give...My hope is that all those that are sincere will find someone with the same sincerity...James

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