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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 06-19-2002 06:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

I watch you climb above my eyes
you are variegation colors
of beryl blue and cobalt
you hover at my mouth smile
as evening star vesper
you are sapphire and ultramarine
I listen to the sounds of you
moan sigh fabric rubbing wind

I am monks cloth under doeskin
you are wandering moon cashmere
mistress of melancholy in vapor weft
coquette of heaven some shelley has versed
butterfly with thigh wings winded on
sheets of indigo silked with white fire
you are the dresden color, the isamine
crepe de chine in governess of flood dance

we laugh loud together quietly
the tweed of your fingers stirs my steeping
my hollow man is dampened to viscid humidity
I am moorland on  mountains of  tomorrow
like sheets of silk covered rorulent with slick
you are blot paper inkless waiting to parch
a huntress of the silver bow in watery recline
I am animal skin shivering slight moments whisper

in morning we will seep between ourselves
we are as glass eye songs then .......
İDark

  


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-19-2002 11:03 AM).]

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1 posted 06-19-2002 06:25 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


I wanted to pick a favorite line...
but I failed...
too many to choose from...
you succeeded...
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2 posted 06-19-2002 06:26 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

I am monks cloth under doeskin
you are wandering moon cashmere
mistress of melancholy in vapor weft
coquette of heaven some shelley has versed

How cool that is DS.  Good morning, a cup of DS, and it never tasted so good.  Well done hon.  *s*


I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)

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3 posted 06-19-2002 06:30 AM       View Profile for texasrose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for texasrose

a real southern belles dream Dark Stranger.  Very impressive words!
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4 posted 06-19-2002 07:01 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

"I am monks cloth under doeskin
you are wandering moon cashmere"

EXACTLY.

A perfect combo of religion and spirit...you, are SO lovely....I sigh.
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5 posted 06-19-2002 07:23 AM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

Like a soft silken tapestry
I seeped into every thread
savouring every word read
Hope
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Incredible, I could feel the colors.
Sandra
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Dark Stranger
An epoppe of abstract that melts the walls of the gallery.
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8 posted 06-19-2002 07:49 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

sunshine, thank you ms coffee morning...glad the lines touched your smile

GS, thank you Donna, big hug to you.

TexasRose, thanks for the Southern smile and the reply.

Serene1, so pleased to have your read ms..you bless me.

Hope, thanks for the poetess reply, you are a pleasure.

Sandramoon....Thanks lady for wearing the colors so well with your eyes

Sy, Arrigoto my friend, humble arrigoto
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9 posted 06-19-2002 09:16 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Amazing..
I lean forward...
into the words...
so as not to
miss one syllable...
not one delicious drop
of Dark's morning.
~Hugs~
Dark Stranger
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10 posted 06-19-2002 09:36 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms E....
you look so sexy leaning that way
thank you for your eye touches
on my embossed thoughts
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11 posted 06-19-2002 10:02 AM       View Profile for Goodknight   Email Goodknight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Goodknight

Dark - this poem touches so many romantic feelings that I can only bow to you and say well done and thanks for a powerful send off for the day!! Paul
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12 posted 06-19-2002 10:14 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Paul, thanks my friend
so pleased to have your regards
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DS...very awesome!

Reading this was a bit like drowning and flying at the same time.  I think I must be on sensory overload.    
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I watch you climb above my eyes
you are variegation colors
of beryl blue and cobalt
you hover at my mouth smile
as evening star vesper
you are sapphire and ultramarine
I listen to the sounds of you
moan sigh fabric rubbing wind

I am monks cloth under doeskin
you are wandering moon cashmere
mistress of melancholy in vapor weft
coquette of heaven some shelley has versed
butterfly with thigh wings winded on
sheets of indigo silked with white fire
you are the dresden color, the isamine
crepe de chine in governess of flood dance

===================================

oh man.........................

poet sir with all the due respect you know I have....
you need to change the title to
"moon of sigh"

have mercy.......me thinks me needs a cigarette and me dont even smoke rofl
DS this is outstanding....most impressive imagery and vocabulary...once again your verbiage takes the reader to the limits and titillates all our senses...very very cool write...this one goes in me library for future eye sighs

"It's not about having what you want ...
It's wanting what you've got"


S.C.

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ms martie, that is such an image
the drown and fly, wish I had said that
thanks hon..


Janet Marie, Thanks for the idea will do that with the title..AND you are so sweet
with the reviews, thank you so much babe
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was it as good for you as it was for me?! I love how your thoughts meander all through the threads of your writings.

There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira

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17 posted 06-19-2002 02:51 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkStranger~
Abstract ... surreal ...
fibers tightly woven in total mesmerize~

Got that Vanilla fragrance all over this one too~

'I am monks cloth under doeskin
you are wandering moon cashmere
mistress of melancholy in vapor weft
coquette of heaven some shelley has versed
butterfly with thigh wings winded on
sheets of indigo silked with white fire
you are the dresden color, the isamine
crepe de chine in governess of flood dance'


LOVE the 'crepe de chine'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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18 posted 06-19-2002 03:08 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

PhaChi, it is wonderful now, thank you for completion in that thought.

Ms Marge, thanks lady friend for the read and sweet review
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I am moorland on  mountains of  tomorrow
like sheets of silk covered rorulent with slick
you are blot paper inkless waiting to parch
a huntress of the silver bow in watery recline
I am animal skin shivering slight moments whisper


Oh..gosh..you've just given me a gem for me word fetish purse..all velvet and tied up tight..you know I love that word..let alone this verse. YES...you really are!

Sincerely,
Reg
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as evening star vesper
you are sapphire and ultramarine
I listen to the sounds of you
moan sigh fabric rubbing wind

I am monks cloth under doeskin
you are wandering moon cashmere
mistress of melancholy in vapor weft
coquette of heaven some shelley has versed
butterfly with thigh wings winded on
sheets of indigo silked with white fire

you are the dresden color, the isamine
crepe de chine in governess of flood dance

=========================


nope....still cant hold memothy breath long enough to get past that second verse.

TY for the moon sigh

"It's not about having what you want ...
It's wanting what you've got"


S.C.

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21 posted 06-19-2002 03:51 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Regina, you gush me riverish with blush flatter skinends..I think I be all huggy for you now...thanks hon


Janet Marie, You are annatto and mallow sides to my smile, thanks for the time you spend in your lovely replies
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sheets of indigo silked with white fire..

Now there's a line I can get my mind around. *weg*

As always, D... with your belletristic talent for inveigling you could even make the alphabet a sonnet of seduction. *wink*

Indigo

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23 posted 06-19-2002 05:45 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms indi

thank you for attributizing my rampageous rancor on rambling

always a pleasure to receive a wink
from your side of the fence

(grinage)
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(smiles) You truly are the King Of Morning, sweet friend, you and Seymour Tabin always seem to post such delightful works in the morning frequently that bring siles to my face! (big hugggsssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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