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south bound, again |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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I stand facing east trying to out-stare the rising sun I squint my eyes, rub the droplets that ooze out no, I am not weeping. it is the sunshine cutting through no, I am not sad just normally misunderstood... as always, as usual business as usual, strict or casual, plain coincidental! it is strange though that I stand facing east while my shadow faces d o w n s o u t h south bound, as I always was south bound, again and Eagle Eye Cherry asks from the radio "are you still having fun?" and I rubbed the light out of my eyes at least I am not directionless just unidirectional like insults you throw from up there towards me down here from north to south south bound train yet again ....... ... ... ... ... ... ....... ..... ... . |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
no, I am not sad just normally misunderstood... tsk...hey lovie...have missed you greatly. and I understand |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! I love this Sudhir... And the presentation is spectacular! I'm never sure which direction I'm headed in.  ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's like this whole poem is a shadow. . . of the writer? well, perhaps. . .but, for now, let's just say that I like the concrete elements that you've used here. . . and the way that you've played with the language. . . great work my friend. . . good to see you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Welcome back, Sudhir... nice to read you again. *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Glad to see you posting again, unuasual presentation and i enjoyed the read. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sudhir Missed you around here my friend. This is great.....Love the format presentation. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sudhir, I felt a smile in these words, sweet friend, may you always head south and find spring fill your heart in every sun-shining gaze, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you all so very much... it is becoming increasingly difficult to spend any time here and I am really sorry about that... regards, sudhir |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
With the exception of a few awkward stumbles (like: 'I squint my eyes, rub the droplets that ooze out no, I am not weeping.' that ooze out - brrrrrrrrrr....lol) this is just excellent. 'and Eagle Eye Cherry asks from the radio "are you still having fun?" and I rubbed the light out of my eyes' loving that.. It's going into my library...you're doing good these days m'friend...  K |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This says so much. Excellent write, Sudhir Sandra |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
it does feel awkward now, Kamla... thanks for pointing out... and thanks a lot for your appreciative words... and many thanks to you too, Sandra... you are a gem... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
WOW! I am truly impressed, this is one great poem! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
North, south, east, west it doesn't matter in poets nest. Nice to see you here again. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks so very much, mycafe and Kethry... Regards, sudhir |
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