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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-06-18 09:01 PM


just because its june
the earth is dying soon
i can’t tumble
                         mumble to the moon
(or bathe with bird inside a spoon?)
all these notions summer
                            potions  
                                 left                                for other day?

is lost inside the serum
of scientific theorem
those little voices here ‘em?
shout close the text and play

whatsthatdidyousay?

o please
please say

o say…

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (06-19-2002 05:11 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-18 09:05 PM


June is a wonderful month. But here in Florida it is a hot month. LOL But hey it is still a good month.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2002-06-18 10:06 PM


Walt
]
This is a crazy time not worth sharing unless a person word flosses.
Well I noticed the words are carved as if to sculptrure...the loss of a loved on. But it is
these notices that you keep sending this thought pro-voking materiel in.....I shall return by dawn

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-06-18 10:18 PM


Walt~
Sometimes your words take me on a trip and I am sure I've been somewhere close to that place before~

This is uniquely wonderful and creatively YOU~
Love it~

*Still laughing at 'swamp thing'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
4 posted 2002-06-19 04:32 PM


I said "Close the text and play!" Clean your ears out, boy!

Nan

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Posts 10095

5 posted 2002-06-19 05:43 PM


Heya Walty!

I love June, mainly because I was born in it and not because it is cold brrrrrr.

and I love your poem too

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