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Just a Dream
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Just a Dream |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Just a Dream  Call it ambition, a dream, or what you will When first a desire is fully instilled, It may be a sport, or art, or poetry It may be a camera, capturing "Oh, Look, See!" It comes to my mind, I’m a lot like you To own a desire, to follow it through Not to show off, but merely to share To leave some semblance of concern and care To cast a shadow in dawn’s first light Then gather vestiges by soft twilight To mix colors and moods as if by song To leave behind senses of "see, we belonged" It’s just a dream, some quiet thoughts Hardly a talent, but all we’ve got So we contemplate on a picture or two And wrap it in poetry, just for you For I would give you a dream to live In softest light, where shadows forgive Where all things possible may be found And come together, on a common ground It’s just a dream that I would share with you A little bit of art, and poetry, too… Photography: K R Jungel [This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-18-2002 09:24 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sun, you do share a dream with each of us. Your beautiful poetry straight from a kind and loving heart of pure sunshine... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like the poem and the picture is perfect for this poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a visual and emotional delight - thanks for the beautiful poem. Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thank you so much Karilea for your sharing...I love your poetry and also your photography.  ~ artistic hugsLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea....it's not just a dream... your poetry weaves magic. ~Hugs You~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Preceding every action, there has always been a dream first. To act without a dream is instinct. To dream without an act is wool-gathering. To dream and then act upon it....now that is life!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Karilea, it may just seem like a dream at first every time you write ba lovely poem like always, but it is never a still frame so if we can see it all before our eyes, you know such a vision is true and it can always come true when we cherish it! (smiles) This is wonderful and captivating, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
My my isn't this a delicate little piece! "It’s just a dream, some quiet thoughts Hardly a talent, but all we’ve got So we contemplate on a picture or two And wrap it in poetry, just for you For I would give you a dream to live In softest light, where shadows forgive Where all things possible may be found And come together, on a common ground" Well you wrap dreams in poetry and share them real wel my dear Sunshine girl! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, thanks! Delicate was what I was striving for! Thanks to everyone for casting your eye along the lines... |
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