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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
Gone I think its been almost week, or maybe just one endless day. Your voice seems to echo around my empty head in a sheet of grey. I have forgotten how to cry, or maybe I haven't stopped the tears. I dare not breathe the stale air, or I'll never again feel you near. My ability to cope, is a strange lie that I tell everyone A pascel abitility to be strong because I can't face the fact.... your gone. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You've captured the emptiness of loneliness in this and have presented it very well.... I enjoyed it very much! Welcome to Passions. This is an excellent place to relax and get to know many other talented writers! Have a nice day! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Daniel I could almost hear your heart breaking and see the pain in your eyes. A very well written piece with very real emotions. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hey Daniel, you must be a Dutchie too, at least your name is LOL Where have you been hiding all this time??  Love your poem, sad, but beautiful sad Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hauntingly sad,....beautiful write. Enjoyed so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you have captured the essence of loneliness and it drips from my heart as I read your poem - thanks for the words...Paul |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ 'I have forgotten how to cry, or maybe I haven't stopped the tears.' That just speaks volumes of sadness ....~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Daniel, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I wish for true joy to fill your heart and for love to erase the wounds and fill you with rapture! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Loneliness is hard, it makes the heart thirst for affection, tenderness, a need to be loved  |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Well written... enjoyed this... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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