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vandana
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0 posted 2002-06-18 06:57 PM



Maybe tonight
Will be ours
Tonight
Stars will tell us
Tonight
Is the night
Stars are so bright
Maybe tonight
Is so right
Don't let your heart
stop telling me
That you are so
In love with me
Maybe tonight
Tonight
Time
Everything will tell us
Tell us
About this love
Maybe
Tonight
It Is true,
True
So Into me
Into your love
Maybe
tonight
Is telling us
About the song
The words of this song
Maybe tonight
Tonight
Will tell us
Tonight,
Maybe tonight.....

[This message has been edited by vandana (06-18-2002 06:58 PM).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-06-18 07:03 PM


I hope that tonight the moon will shine bright upon your desired night...James
Goodknight
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2 posted 2002-06-18 07:06 PM


wonderful anticipating words of love - thanks Paul
ethome
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3 posted 2002-06-18 07:43 PM


Very nice inquiry into the heart searching for love!
Nicely done!!

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-06-18 09:56 PM




(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I too wish that every night brings you true happiness and that the love you share is written in the stars and always feels so right! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-06-18 09:59 PM


This poem makes me think happy thoughts too.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-06-18 10:08 PM


Wonderful vandana.
Enjoyed so much.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dulcinea
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7 posted 2002-06-19 09:27 AM


I could sense the urgency in the need of revelation...hope your heart was fully satisfied! Nicely done.
Sven
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8 posted 2002-06-19 04:28 PM


yes. . . it should be so. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

suthern
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9 posted 2002-06-20 12:54 PM


I like this a lot, vandana. *S*
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