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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-06-18 06:27 PM


There's a lot to be said
About being honest and straight
Time moves by so very quickly
For no one will it wait

My mother had a lot of trouble
Explaining the facts of life
She always kept herself busy
A good mother and wife

Her generation kept things quiet
Certain things just shouldn't be told
But I was no longer a child
I was nearly thirteen years old

I had so many questions
That I carried in my load
So when Mum didn't tell me
I asked my friend across the road

From then on I made a promise
That when I had a child of my own
I wouldn't make the same mistake
She wouldn't feel lost and all alone

My experience made me determined
To never hide things from my child
She could ask me anything
Without her mind running wild

Never will I refuse to answer
Any question she has for me
I'll be open and I'll be honest
Which is how I feel it should be

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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1 posted 2002-06-18 06:39 PM


a lesson learned and a powerful poem to reveal the depths of learning and of the lesson - thanks Paul
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-06-18 09:54 PM


"My experience made me determined
To never hide things from my child
She could ask me anything
Without her mind running wild

Never will I refuse to answer
Any question she has for me
I'll be open and I'll be honest
Which is how I feel it should be"




(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Sue, I'm so sorry your mom was so preoccupied and never got heart to heart with you that much, sweet friend, there is indeed a great sense of wisdom here and I know you will always be a caring mother with so much love to share and even when it may be a difficult question to answer, you will always say it in the best way possible! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-06-18 09:56 PM


Now that is a powerful lesson. if we don't answer our children's questions they will go to other people. Then they we get wrong answer.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-06-28 10:21 AM



Hush
shhh
we don't talk about
things like that
not now
later

~*~

some things
can't wait

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
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Kansas USA
5 posted 2002-06-28 08:29 PM


Excellent write, Sue!  What a great message.
Enjoyed!



Shenachie

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2002-06-28 09:03 PM


I so agree. Great job, here.
Sandra

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