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Zukene_Chic
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since 2001-09-26
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0 posted 2002-06-18 06:21 PM


The black fingernail polish
Peels off slowly
And falls to the ground
Much like my soul
Dies bit by bit
All because you left

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Sven
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1 posted 2002-06-19 04:47 PM


an interesting picture. . .

this needs to be seen more. . . well done. . .

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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2 posted 2002-06-19 04:48 PM


Very well done.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-06-19 04:49 PM


Zukene_Chic
Could be expanded, enjoyed.

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