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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-06-18 02:56 PM

M’lady of life, of mornin’ sway.
In light yon moon’s sensual display.
Of passion’s winds of whisper still,
born of this night, of freedom’s will.

Listen dear heart of voice in flow.
Capture this flight of wish in throw.
Hold to thy dream of vision clear.
Sleep of blue eye, thou shalt not fear.

My lady, wilt thee walk beside?
Wilt thee surely come, thee not hide?
Take thy soft hand within mine own.
For thee art not in dreams alone.

Fuel the flames of thy passion’s fire.
Boiling steam of thine own desire
Swill of the taste finest wine’s sip.
Hunger this plate in fill, thy lips.

Sleep through the night and rest thy soul.
Awake to trump and drummer’s roll.
Call out to me whence thee arise.
Feel of my heart, these waiting sighs.

Furie
Junior Member

since 2002-06-17

Posts 39
Myriad of Unkown Places

1 posted 2002-06-18 03:25 PM

Lovely poem.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-06-18 03:38 PM

That just fulfilled my need for romance for today.

Sandra

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-06-18 04:04 PM

well done Sir, surely indeed there will be many 'twill feel the same. . .

I bow most humbly to thee Sir. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-06-18 06:02 PM

You wouldn't believe the problems I had in getting an opportunity to respond to this...

quote:
Listen dear heart of voice in flow.
Capture this flight of wish in throw.
Hold to thy dream of vision clear.

These speak as clear as a mountain stream...

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

5 posted 2002-06-18 06:06 PM

One might be ready ride off to save the poor damsel in distress with Sir Lancelot with the romance woven by these words - thanks Paul

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-06-18 07:24 PM

Oh how your lovely poetry graces these pages, Barry...

~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2002-06-18 07:30 PM

Magnus

You're very good at writing in the old style traditional poetry.....Has a real romantic flair to it!!
Very nice touch!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2002-06-18 07:33 PM

Hello Barry

You masterfully weave so much beauty and wonder into everything you write and I feel my spirit rise when I read your outstanding words. This was so very beautiful. Once again I was reminded of two very famous star crossed lovers, Romeo & Juliet.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2002-06-18 09:42 PM

Magnus darling heart this is utterly utterly splendiferous, you never disappoint me darling boy not ever, and this is yet another perfectly crafted and divine poem that has fallen from your pen onto this page of blue and lit the whole night. Goodness your writing is superb, exceptional as always your style really shines through whatever you write.

And my darling boy how many times am I to ask you to just once not shine so brightly, if I could I would be jealous but it’s impossible when you write sheer perfection Besides I love your writing too much, so I’ll forgive you, but remember darling boy beware the dark of the moon because you never know if I’ll be there.

Absolutely perfect I love it utterly utterly utterly, and as always you are tres tres bon M’sieur

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 2002-06-18 10:43 PM

Barry, you were born long after your time...or else you are very, very old! In either case, I enjoy the jousting and the chivalry

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-06-18 10:47 PM

BRAVO!!! Yes, I agree with Balladeer, you are indeed an old soul, and I mean that your soul is filled with the chivalry of centuries ago and you bring us all hope and set an example that it can be revived into 21st century culture and beyond! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

12 posted 2002-06-19 09:46 AM

Most excellent ...
Balladeer's comment is ageless ...
your words can find any place in time, if one's heart can open as far as yours.

A true pleasure to read.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2002-06-20 12:33 PM

This is beautifully romantic... I like it very much! *S*

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