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Self Focusing |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Drive defying logic Bruised ego loses balance Side steps of determination Forward motion of shifting sand Negative feedback turned Positive momentum Clawed purpose Elated movement Inches of migration Miles ahead No distance too great For inner satisfaction Small piece of ceiling Dripping paint blisters Drying perfection Sistine Chapel Injustice provoked Taxing purpose Party of accreditation Commissioning a new country Thundering fire wall Rolling down a valley Tree tops of hell Blanket covered survival Innocence of the womb Doctor’s sad conclusion No way possible Miracle survival Nothing before me but pain Nothing behind but loss of blood No respect in backward motion Prayer being offered Religion of denial Personal aberration Distorted dedication Self focusing Alone you are David Goliath presence prevails Army of trepidation Higher purpose Awaited mixed fate Scorched sunburned chill Storming lightning silence Time advancing smiling clown Meditation Education Permutation Finally exhilaration Success Email me at davelyoung1@hotmail.com D.Lester Young (05/18/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) http://www.authorsden.com/visit/author.asp?AuthorID=5012 |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
There are so many images here, it is hard to pinpoint and collect just a few. Certainly this is a well focused poem D. Lester, very well done. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome!!!!! Great discriptions her Cold hands means a warm heart |
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