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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635


0 posted 2002-06-18 12:43 PM


What you Said

You eye the lets of silk blouse
Abhorring restraints
Whispering, let it swing loose
So it swift shifts long hips


And you smile at the bent
Of neck
To the sound of listening

Anticipating the curve of lip
In wicked smile

Then you pretend
To whisper to the blouse
As if the eyelets could see your
Intent
And your smile falls with silk thoughts
Imparted


© Copyright 2002 Decaflame - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2002-06-18 12:52 PM


ms deca
may I whisper to the silk
of the underside
of your garment thoughts

lovely  sedective ms

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2002-06-18 12:57 PM


This is a prime example why Deca-flame fits your perfectly...

awesome!
~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
3 posted 2002-06-18 01:22 PM


So enticing!  Great write, Decaflame.

Shenachie

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-06-18 01:29 PM


OH MY Deca!!
Must be warm where you are also...
You write way cool though...
love it girl!
~Hugs~

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
5 posted 2002-06-18 01:57 PM


And your smile falls with silk thoughts
Imparted

I love the raw sensuality here, Decaflame...
I can just see that little smile growing.

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-06-18 03:59 PM


A very wicked smile
beneath eyes agleam
Last more than awhile
such sensual steam

Oh yes Deca...you are earning your name very
well today...

Temptress
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Mobile, AL
7 posted 2002-07-07 04:50 AM


**Sighingsighing**
Lovely and sensual

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Mysteria
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British Columbia, Canada
8 posted 2002-07-07 08:34 PM


Yes that was a flame for sure loved it!


Nothing means more to me than faith,
family and my friends.

     Howdy from Canada

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-07-07 08:38 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words you write and the passion they light with! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
10 posted 2002-07-07 08:58 PM


Perfect. ThisDiamond
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