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Dulcinea
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0 posted 2002-06-18 10:14 AM



Our Time

Wrapped, enrapt-within the feeling of you
Cozy, comfortable-in our aerie just for two
Loving, in love-holding each so close
Quiet time, calm time-the time I covet most.

Feather magic that drifts a mind away
Gentle caresses that wipe gone the day
Soft and warm in blanketed togetherness
Cooing words of missing and tenderness.

No masks, no pretenses, neither last nor first
Feeding our souls-water for the spirits thirst
Making love so special in fading sunshine.
Sharing precious moments, yours and mine.

This is our time, at the end of each day apart
That grand time of exchanging each other’s heart.


To my Darling...with all my love!


© Copyright 2002 Dulcinea - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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1 posted 2002-06-18 10:17 AM


so nicely done and well written and inviting - makes me want to be your darling - Paul
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2 posted 2002-06-18 10:21 AM


Dulcie, it is good to see your words again doll, and this is absolutely Dulcie at her best.  Exquisite and sooooooo beautiful.
Hugs coming at ya girl.

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


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3 posted 2002-06-18 10:36 AM


Paul, I will take that as a very real compliment, thank you! ~~blushing~~

~D~! So good to see you here as well, and writing superbly! Thanks so much for the kind words and the

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4 posted 2002-06-18 12:40 PM


Dulcie darling girl so good to see you here, what a delight it is to read your writing. I’m always, eternally stunned by the way you shape and form a poem. This is outstandingly good. Wonderful writing, excellent utterly utterly perfect. I absolutely love it.

The depth of the moment is encapsulated in this brilliant jewel of writing. In other words I love it utterly, and my how love suits you darling girl, tell Jeff that he is incredibly lucky. Heart hugs from me and Krissy to you both and a soft kitten kiss to Batman x x


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-06-18 02:11 PM


Absolutely beautiful!
Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-06-18 02:19 PM


Dulcie...I can almost feel your feelings here....
very beautifully written.

~ hugs spinning with admiration

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Dulcinea
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7 posted 2002-06-18 03:35 PM


Awwwwwww…Mushy! You are far too kind! Jeff is the best inspiration a girl could have. To me, he is a perfect mesh of romantic, sexy, sweet and fun loving! I feel I am the luckiest girl in the world to have him, though I know he would agree with you! Huge appreciative hugs back to you and Krissy, and Batman was purrrfectly happy with that kitty kiss (on top of his head is where he loves them best). Thank you dear lady!

Thank you Nancy! It is always an honor to see your comments here! (((hugs)))

Lyra, sweetest Chipmunk in the Great Lakes! If I were to express my full feelings, this place couldn’t contain them! Thank you so much for the sweet spinning hugs!

Sven
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8 posted 2002-06-18 04:17 PM


oh. . . sigh sigh sighsighsigh. . .

do you get the feeling that I enjoyed this Dulcinea??  

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Dulcinea
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9 posted 2002-06-18 04:20 PM


~~blushing~~ Dear Sven, can you see that yes, I certainly can see that! Thank you so much for the kind compliment!
vandana
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10 posted 2002-06-18 06:48 PM


enjoy
ShadowRider
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11 posted 2002-06-18 10:05 PM


My sweet Dulcy Lamb,
i can't express in words how this loving poem made me glow inside.

Me, speechless...what a concept!  
Thank you, here, and in person......

Those words ring with so much truth of how our life is,
and I def know how lucky we are.  
~lingering hugggg~
jeff

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12 posted 2002-06-18 10:08 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I know you will always make your love so very happy just as I wish smiles to fill your heart everyday! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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13 posted 2002-06-18 10:24 PM


Dulcinea~
Delicately beautiful~

'Quiet time, calm time-the time I covet most.'

Ohhhhhh, yes~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dulcinea
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14 posted 2002-06-19 09:20 AM


vandana, Thank you so very much!

Awww Darlin, you always know how to get those ~~heart sighs~~ don’t you?

Noah, thank you sweet friend for those kind words, you always make me smile with your thoughtfulness! (((hugs)))

Thank you Marge, a compliment from you is always an honored pleasure! ((hugs))

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