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the soul in you
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the soul in you |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
The Soul in You in the midst of travelling places searching for a comforting voice where only lonely souls could hear ... I found you ... your tender words and gentle ways melted the frozen within me in profound simplicity if only I could comprehend how so the haunting thoughts where emotions kept wilfully chilled could flee ... you touched me ... with feelings unmasked that flowed through the spine of me and held me strong I am reborn 'cause of you and you have me realised the soul in you is the only sole I want from you ... I love you so ... friendship in its truest form is about finding the simple mutuality of comfort...in each other |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Here's to poetry, and to more writing...Please! Check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Pasions This is a delightful introductory write! What a great start! I'll be looking for more! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Welcome!!! You will love it here! You write with such passion and soul - Bravo! Roniece |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Good Morning and Welcome to Passions!! Very lovely first post! I know you will love it here... I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
what a very good poem - I enjoyed it a lot - please write more for us - Paul |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love the closing lines of this. . . souls are something that interest me. . . as this does. . . well done. . . and welcome. . . I know that you'll like it here. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is an absolutely lovely first post, mycafe, but in the third line from the bottom, I think you meant soul instead of sole... Thanks for sharing it with us and welcome to Passions  ~ welcoming hugsLyra |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our humble home! I know you'll fit right in - take some time and get to know our many 'hidey holes' - we've got some wonderful treasures just waiting to be discovered. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
dear frens, thank you for your warmth and encouraging words. I know I'm definitely going to be here for long ! ...and thank you Sunshines for the lovely greeting card. many hugs, mycafe |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I am reborn 'cause of you and you have me realised the soul in you is the only sole I want from you ... I love you so"  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this made me cry, the whole poem is beautiful but this part made me smile the most of all! This is a lovely debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Marie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
 What an incredible first post. I am looking forward to reading more of you here in our big blue home. Very Moving.Love, Light and Peace Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome. A great first write. Pleasant dreams always. ThisDiamond |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Such beautiful words of love and longing. Welcome to Passions and I hope you enjoy it here. I will certainly look forward to reading more of your fabulous words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
mycafe, I hope that these feelings, captured here, stay. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
mycafe, interesting username and delightful first post here..a belated welcome to passions and hopes that you will stay here for loooooong ...especially enjoyed these lineswhere emotions kept wilfully chilled could flee |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Had to check out your first post and I am glad I did. Very cool style you have given us on your maiden journey into these pages. I much enjoyed. A belated welcome and I look forward to reading more of you. |
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