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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2002-06-18 12:55 PM



Pollenation

In the land of Flowerdale
car-nations like to drive
down the hills where sudden drops-
have upsydaisies thrive

The moisture in the air's so thick
with so much here to dew
the laffodills are laughing loud
but the joke is not on you

Tiger lilies, dandy lions,
snapdragon’s make a circus
planting two lips on the ground
will never over work us

Gloomy poets write blue sonnets
merrygolds give us cheer
getting lost in whistlebrushes
ain't so bad round here

No florist lives in Flowerdale
just swarms of busy bees
I hope you get the picture now-
for what the photo-synthe-sees

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (06-19-2002 12:13 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-18 06:41 AM



ROTF...somehow, I don't think an apology to Martie was required...I think, however, that you WILL hear her giggle!

vlraynes
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2 posted 2002-06-18 07:33 AM



Walty-
I agree with Karilea...this is bound to get a giggle
out of our resident flower girl.
Very cute and creative.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

elisaseyes
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fort worth texas
3 posted 2002-06-18 03:44 PM


Look, I got you a bouquet of noses!
ethome
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4 posted 2002-06-19 04:05 AM


Walt
Just too perfect!....Martie's going to love it!

Martie
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5 posted 2002-06-19 05:11 PM


Walt

This florist that lives in California has a great sense of humor.  This was delightful!

suthern
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6 posted 2002-06-20 12:57 PM


ROFL... I love this, walt!!!
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