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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
I finally was able to share my mystery everyone asking who was the one who stole my heart askin whos the girl that made all this poetry start. while i finally shared with my friend that happens to be her freind too hopin and praying that youll smile when she finally tells you. as this year draws closer and closer to the end of my jr high day ill be movin on to gr 11 after wednesday scared and worried about what is to come with 2 years left till im out what am i to become. will i be sucsessful will i have a good life but all and all will this girl that i finally shared end up to be my wife? secrets out as her good friend knows now when she finally tells her will she smile and say with a wow or will she turn away and say i dont want him ever or now. All these and more yet to be seen this sumer i shant worry or shead anny tears, for this summer will be the best summer theres ever been! The man of few words... |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
a very sweet poem..I wish you the best if this pertains to your life right now.  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope some good things happen...James |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
nice words - hope for the best for you - Paul |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well, the good news is, this is a nice piece. The bad news is, you have a looong way to go before you are, what you will be. The good news is, it is a wonderful adventure. The bad news is, it is full of heartbreak and disappointment. The good news is, it's all worth it! Best of luck, young Jedi ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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