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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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here's an old poem of mine that Lori-Anne (my grrl) rescued from the garbage heap. she was right. Lore She knows precisely, exactly how to read pain -- its many textures, not so smooth as you think. The worst kind being that which doesn't bite; but that which caresses you falsely into following down. Her words light up the world via pressure points and honest love. From her mind, to her fingers, words shape and flower, some wilt -- all are planted right where they need to be, whether to grow among a cemetery or schoolyard. Sometimes, I wonder why I do this -- why we do this thing called writing. Sometimes, I wonder why we hurt yet still laugh; how we can paint with dust and insert teeth into gums, connect eyes to brains, make whole humans somehow more complete than life's own sweating work. I will admit my failure at belief, occasionally, in the world being fit for art. I continue to chew up my own work like razorsharp eraser nubs, unhappy yet unafraid to change tints (and lives) again and again. Then I read her; I am glad to write some more. She said burn ... together. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Mike, Well, I'm sure glad she rescued this one. Enjoyed so very much! ~Hugs YOU!~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Mike hi there Your writing is incredible carrying within it a quality that speaks to the soul. YOU are incredibly talented. Your writing is incredibly descriptive and well presented and when you write with your heart you surely shine. This is superb writing, and it will stay with me for I’m keeping this special treasure piece of yours.   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As always, I am tugged into the concepts of your works. So well described and bubbling in the boil of promise made. ThisDiamond |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
absolutely woth being rescued and that is an understatement - thanks Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh and she was absolutely right to rescue this one, Mr.Squirrel.... Don't ever throw any of your poetry away, because even though it might look bad to you at a particular moment... you may go back and read it again, weeks...maybe even months later, and it will look so much better... this has been my experience, which probably explains why I have so many notebooks full of writing lying around...  ~ hugs to a fellow rodentLyra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yes, she was right, and I'm so glad she dug it out..... Loved the way you placed the flowers and the brilliancy your words gathered up. Very good~ very~  |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
Every writer needs a friend like that, who can write beside you and inspire you. I've found that it usually goes both ways. A very beautiful poem. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She knows precisely, exactly how to read pain -- its many textures, not so smooth as you think. The worst kind being that which doesn't bite; but that which caresses you falsely into following down. ========================================= HOW could you throw that verse away?!!??!! What have I told you and Sen about trashing and burning your poetry!!!  Tell LA I said she has as impeccible taste in poetry ... as she does men  and STOP throwing away poetry..or I'll have to throw me butterfly slippers at ya.  later-gator mothyme You ... |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Wise woman that girl of yours...this is a very well written piece! Bravo Lori-Anne! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is so good. So many images, so well-written. Nan |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Don't ever throw anything away again, y'hear? Good. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
keeper stuff BSQ, keep the lady too enjoyed the art sir |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks! She said burn ... together. -TON [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-19-2002 05:26 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Mike She was absolutely right! This is exceptional! "Sometimes, I wonder why I do this -- why we do this thing called writing. Sometimes, I wonder why we hurt yet still laugh; how we can paint with dust and insert teeth into gums, connect eyes to brains, make whole humans somehow more complete than life's own sweating work." Me too! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, ethome. Let it be said that Lori will always know more than me.She said burn ... together. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike You wrote it...and she recognized something you did not. That's what friends are for. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow, this poem's got legs! Thanks, Martie. (this proves I should never trust my own judgment when it comes to personal work) She said burn ... together. |
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