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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-06-17 09:08 PM



The thin blue dress of summer
Twirl about the hem in waves of white
In the hot spot once again new comer
Chase the tan of full exposure to the light

The thin blue dress of summer
In the warm wind to unveil the skin
Flits the sleek smiled happy hummer
Chase the youthful heart as in begin

The thin blue dress of summer
Wispy trims of cotton and of glow
Softly bouncing to calypso drummer
Chase the heat across the beaches indigo

Copyright Kkh 6/16/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-06-17 09:34 PM


ThisDiamond
A nice write and I enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-06-17 09:38 PM


WOW!!  Kathleen....
What a fantastic summer poem!
I love it!
~Hugs~

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-06-17 10:18 PM


Makes one want to head to the beach and
splash on the sunscreen,  catch some
rays...

A light but excellent write...Thanx Kathy.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-06-17 10:31 PM




(smiles) Oh Kathleen, I just love this, sweet friend, may every day this summer bring you robin-egg sky smiles! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-06-18 12:16 PM


This is so.......perfect, Kathleen...
I cannot think of a better word for it...
Maybe beautiful...
how about beautiful and perfect...
yes...I think that says it.

~ indigo hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2002-06-18 02:47 PM



TD, you're shining...

Dulcinea
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7 posted 2002-06-18 03:11 PM


Makes me wish I were young again, enjoying those beaches...very nicely done TD! *S*
catalinamoon
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8 posted 2002-06-18 03:42 PM


This makes me see the ocean, and hear music.
Think I will have a little dance.
Sandra

ethome
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9 posted 2002-06-19 04:03 AM


Beautiful summer poem!
Nice clear images!

Sven
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10 posted 2002-06-19 04:38 PM


hey. . . I've been there. . . nothing like it. . .

great work. . .

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