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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-06-17 07:57 PM




Dreamers Wish

Follow the thread of glowing thought
Strung together in wonders sought
Inside the mind of poet’s dream
Love waits to show a face unseen

Unwrap the cloud reveal the touch
Which hides within the wish of such
Dismiss the thought of nevermore
Hold to your heart the seek of sure

Reveal your hope your wish is true
Reach for the star that calls to you
These dreams don’t fade just don’t let go
Believe in dreams and let hope flow

Open your mind to surity
Give thought a breath of certainty
Within you there is so much more
Take to the sky and you will soar

Marsha



Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-06-17 08:05 PM


Reveal your hope your wish is true
Reach for the star that calls to you
These dreams don’t fade just don’t let go
Believe in dreams and let hope flow
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This is my favourite stanza Marsha...
but I love the entire piece...
SO well done!
~Hugs~

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-06-17 08:12 PM


Mushy, I feel this poem...I have felt this
poem...

Exceptional....Yes...let it go...let it
flow...

Utterly divine,  darling girl...OH yes it is.

Goodknight
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3 posted 2002-06-17 09:12 PM


So very much for a dreamer to wish on and a wonderful poem to read and feel - Thanks Paul
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4 posted 2002-06-17 09:31 PM


Marsha,
You are more of a romantic than I am. Wonderful write.

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5 posted 2002-06-17 10:37 PM




(smiles) Oh Marsha, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know you are going to make your love so very happy always, always hold that wish true and it will happen! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-06-17 10:52 PM


Oh so dreamy and romantic, Marsha...
and so very well done too!

~ dreamy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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