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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-06-17 02:29 PM


Death of Love

Seeds of untruth
living a lie.
Make believe love
to do or die.
You say that you love me
than what do you give
make believe love
with no will to live.
Like a French guillotine
words of death
free fall from the sky.
Words of untruth given in lie.
Severed arteries doomed
forever to die.
Love doesn't live here
the most bitter reply.
Who could imagine
or give reasons why.
Understand the logic.
Don't even try.
In death of love
take time to cry.

JamesLee
June17
Thoughts
FromTimes
Past


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-06-17 02:33 PM


James, I am so pleased that you added this is from times past...
Because I don't want you to be anything but
completely happy with your love Jinn.
~Big hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-06-17 02:46 PM


Thank you Enchantress...yes these are thoughts from past relationships...not Jin.
I am happy with Jin most of the time...
Perhaps not as happy when she's not kissing me...ha..ha..James

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3 posted 2002-06-17 06:33 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, I'm so happy this isn't related to your love for Jin, sweet friend, you deserve to be so very happy and I hope this is a love that will always live on! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-06-17 06:37 PM


That was a beatutiful piece of poetry.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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