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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2002-06-17 02:12 PM


cauldrons boil
civil slaves toil
celestial light is cast
yet facts disintegrate
congregations medidate
heavenly powers alight
yet associations denegrate...

flicker of hope
butterfly scales shimmer
rays of light cope
dark clouds release slivers
of iridescent light
yet facts disintegrate
into shrouded nights.



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1 posted 2002-06-17 02:54 PM


Very very well done Martin!
The title is very appropriate!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2002-06-17 03:52 PM


Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-06-17 06:31 PM




WOW!!! Such mysterious passion fills these words, sweet friend, I just love the wonderful inspiration your words conjure! (big hugggssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-06-17 06:50 PM


mysterious pasion yes, thanks for sharing


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