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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-06-17 06:19 AM



Circumstances Of Heart

Instead of a stalemate
Silence should be ending
I have asked questions
Are the answers pending

Awaiting your decision
Thoughts are sent erratic
Causing this deadlock
Communication is static

This hopeless feeling
We  found ourselves in
Here at this standstill
Where no one can win

Powers of  grasping
Mind holding the links
Inwardly I can view
My lonely heart sinks

My forever invitation
He slowly ripped apart
A mind states the fact
Circumstances of heart


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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-17 03:55 PM


Beautiful. Just beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-06-17 06:26 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Hope, this is wonderful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope this loneliness has disappeared now and comfort fills your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2002-06-17 06:39 PM


Such wisdom captured in a wonderfully smooth read and the cadence of your word didn't miss a beat.  Well done and a very enjoyable read.
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