»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #21
»
sabado grotto
| Open Poetry #21 |
|
sabado grotto |
|
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
|
we swam the blue water pools you made them green with your eyes the palm hands wrote names there with shadow fingers in pretend night dragon fly people made wing laughter the queen palms opened fans grotto rock was our secret cave we drew pictures with wet hair brushes we were wax side seams with our skin when sun melded our lengths we turned red together under water our voices were in bubble words the purple flowers made butterflys and passion fruit breathed swollen God came with his digital eyes and said we were good for heaven he took our skin and made it one shirt warm ©Dark |
||
| © Copyright 2002 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The mystic dreamlike physiognomy of the images in this is fantastic.....I thoroughly enjoyed the read! |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not only a paradise of color, and feeling, but of sound as well... more summer reading, please... |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS Sounds like a lovely place, made even more so with your fresh image words. |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ethome, thanks for the review and the comments. much appreciated Sunshine, thanks lady for the coffee smile and wave Ms martie, thanks for the wave lady...hope you have sun over there? |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Thoughts of sports with space of grace. |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sy, thanks sire for the reviews and friendly comments |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, exotic work, D. Core |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cor, 'thanks lady for the read and the words of "atta" |
||
|
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
dragon fly people made wing laughter the queen palms opened fans grotto rock was our secret cave we drew pictures with wet hair brushes Yes...I guess I would too.. Love how you glyph these in my mind. Sincerely, Reg |
||
|
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That sounds like a world I want to go to. Cold hands means a warm heart |
||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Must you always have that sway of exotic to you my dear???? *shrouded in sensuality* must have been the purple bubbles...  you know I loved this... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina, come swim with me let us warm the water til it steams thanks babe ..you smile me loner 23...it is a place just outside of anywhere in love light you can see it thanks for the read and words devina, got bubbles...if you got purple time to play..thanks for the read babe |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, I just love everything about your words here, especially the digital eyes and the whole soft T-shirt feel of it! (big huggssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
