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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-06-17 05:24 AM


the fourth angel rode from the desert edges
and put his youth in red and white wings
from his mouth he spoke lead and ryu
he was the new army of know no sky

from the valley thay came in leather
their horses were loud hooved
the sun set early under stones
fix way songs stirred the blond leg women

they ran from the avenue to dark streets
and waited for the breath of sin
to brush their lips with now burn
they would be empty tomorrow

but they would whisper the names
of black ink that swims under skin
of red ink that makes the eyes glass
of the snow dust that makes smile faces

the fourth angel knows hell love now

©Dark

(angel wake # 4)

© Copyright 2002 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-17 05:32 AM




(sigh) Wow, this is sooooooo wonderfull sensual, sweet friend, it comes to show even angels can be tempted! (big hugggssssss) Such passion fills your words, sweet friend, I love your series, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2002-06-17 05:37 AM


noah, thanks my friend...actually was a hells angel tribute over the weekend to the 4th angel that has gone since the river run war started...
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-06-17 05:39 AM


Raphael---I know him well...



you are quite remarkable.

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2002-06-17 10:08 AM


Ms serene...

Don't think it is the same one..(grin), but sure appreciate your reviews.

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2002-06-18 03:31 AM


Well hell, you mean to say when I get to heaven I have to take a number?

Ok I'll be two!     Nice poem DS~

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2002-06-18 07:42 AM


bluezy..you don't ever have to take a number..just look out for the pipes..they are hot as hell  (grin) thanks babe
Decaflame
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7 posted 2002-06-18 12:41 PM



Burned bare leg
on the pipe, just once

Pilgrimage
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8 posted 2002-06-18 12:45 PM


When I read this poem I was struck with the mystery and strangeness. I like it.

Nan

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2002-06-18 12:58 PM


deca..
we got the best first aid for that
many more rides til you know'
where that pipe is..(grin)

thanks lady


Pilgrimage, thanks for the review, real time in angel world is strange and severe

rwood
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10 posted 2002-06-18 01:05 PM


Your eyes teach me..inform me and make me see more than what is viable. Wonderful write D.

Sincerely,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2002-06-18 01:18 PM


regina, my eyes enjoy your company
wear them often ms,
thanks babe

Enchantress
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12 posted 2002-06-18 01:20 PM


*smiling here*

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2002-06-18 01:33 PM


enchantress, sure like that smile
ok, where did you hide the keys..

thanks babe

Dulcinea
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14 posted 2002-06-18 03:03 PM


I have always enjoyed your image poems best, and this is no exception...nicely done DS.
wranx
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15 posted 2002-06-18 06:09 PM


Thoughtful imagery, thanks for the craftsmanship

Stellar read. (wasn't she a soap actress?)

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Goodknight
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16 posted 2002-06-18 06:35 PM


images images images - they are on the surface and oh so deep - captivating - Paul
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