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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-17 01:19 AM



Melt Me(inspired by Krawdad’s“Melt” )

did you
know you
melt me
long past
your fire
flowing through
entwined around
to become
my desire
gentle warming
all aglow
thick beneath
my skin
angel’s wings
will have
to wait
till I
again taste
your sin


"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-06-17 02:54 AM


I almost hate to comment on something so personal...if it's not? then that's a compliment too...intimacy abounds in this piece...and? intrigued by the "again"--

but if hunger had a voice? this would be it.


redheart angrybraids
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2 posted 2002-06-17 04:47 AM


a touch of orangne can calm the moment.
as you can see.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


1slick_lady
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3 posted 2002-06-17 04:33 PM


k...personal?...just a poem inspired by another poem...but if you liked it...i'm glad...h

ra...thank you for stopping by to read...h

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