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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2002-06-17 12:38 PM

Melt



I want to melt you

with the words I craft

into a pool of sigh

and deep into which I

can leap and disappear

I want to swim the depths

of the liquid you

surrounded on all sides






©   061602

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-06-17 12:55 PM

krawdad...I really really like this..its so unique and deserves to be at the top of the page!

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2002-06-17 01:17 AM

k...inspiring...look and see...h

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-06-17 07:34 PM

Excellent!!! (Here in Phoenix, with temperatures around 115 degrees, ANYONE can melt ME!)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-06-17 07:42 PM

.....*SIGH*....

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2002-06-18 06:53 PM

So glad I didn't miss this one my friend, for again it touches hearts.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2002-06-18 07:07 PM

thanks for allowing me to "splash" in your poetry - Paul

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-06-18 10:22 PM

Krawdad~
This is just stunning~
Softly inviting ...~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-06-18 10:23 PM

Awe inspiring.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-06-18 10:36 PM

(smiles) Oh E.J, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, like Joanna said, this deserves another place at the top of the page because it is soooooo lovely! (big hugggssssss) This is a timeless treasure of romance, sweet friend, we all love you so uch! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2002-06-18 10:37 PM

Bring life preserver!
Excellent work, in a silver shining wrapper.
ThisDiamond

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

11 posted 2002-07-21 02:10 AM

Inspired by another PIP poet.
Easy to write.

Such nice comments.
Thanks!

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