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LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
United States

0 posted 2002-06-17 12:12 PM



hold my hand
& walk  with me through time
aligned with the stars
we can sail eternity
follow my footsteps in the clouds
and feel my fingers on your lips
fall into my arms
to fall with me
as we fall into Love

watching me alone
hollow tears dripping from my cheeks
You follow their path
with a crystal cloth
and break my pain

hold my heart
in your hands
it is yours to keep
to have and to hold
'till death do us part..

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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Saunni
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
1 posted 2002-06-17 12:24 PM


Tai, this is beautiful, simply beautiful!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-06-17 02:11 PM


Like this Tai...James
Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
3 posted 2002-06-17 07:36 PM


beautifully written, Tai...

~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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