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LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
United States

0 posted 2002-06-17 12:04 PM



Look at you sitting
with your arms
still around me
a finger still
tracing lazy patterns
calmly on my back
and you say you're angry
at me

You, angry with me
for not saying what I think
and Me, angry at myself
for not finding the words
to express what I feel
..or even give you a reason why I cannot

Sitting on your lap
watching your face look mad
I try to match your look
But my Heart won't let me

Frustrated
I move from your
lap
sit by myself for but
a moment
before you give me
that look

and I crawl back to you
a smile spreading
from my lips to yours
in several sweet kisses
You try to stay mad
and I try to look mad
but Love
just wont let anger interefere
...I never knew Love was so strong


*giggles*...me and my love came close to our first arguement tonight..but I guess tonight was not the night   hehe, lucky me.. Mmm! It feels so..I dont know, just plain "good", to be in love....



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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-17 12:05 PM


very good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2002-06-17 06:20 PM


Keep that feeling and don't lose sight of that night.  Wonderful write.  I look forward to more of your works.
Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
3 posted 2002-06-17 06:23 PM


I liked this one, light and loving.

Nan

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