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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-06-16 08:52 PM



My son brought this home from school for father's day. I thought it was lovely and wanted to share it with you. I am unsure of whom the author is but the sentiment is wonderful.
A Little Child Follows Me

A careful dad I aught to be,
A little child follows me.
I do not dare to go astray,
For fear he’ll go the self-same way.

Not once can I escape his eyes,
What’er he sees me do he tries.
Like me he says he’s going to be,
That little child who follows me.

He thinks that I am good and fine,
Believes in every word of mine.
The bad in me he must not see,
That little child that follows me.

I must remember as I go,
Though summer sun, winter snow.
I’m building for the years to be,
My little child who follows me.


© Copyright 2002 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
1 posted 2002-06-16 09:03 PM


You are right, Marilyn...
It is very lovely.
Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

~ hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2002-06-16 09:07 PM


I'm glad you posted it.....It is amazing!  "Out of the mouths of babes"
Hello to you from a fellow Canuck

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2002-06-17 08:03 AM


THankyou so much for your replies. I am glad that you enjoyed it as much as I did.


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