Broken Heart (sorry if this is my 2nd time posting this)

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Open Poetry #21

Broken Heart (sorry if this is my 2nd time posting this)

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-06-16 08:08 PM

My heart breaks
Everytime I think
I might lose you

It makes me blue
To know
I have no clue
That your gone

I always watches what I said
But it made no difference

Your gone
It hurts to know
You left me
With a broken heart
With no care in the world

Cold hands means a warm heart

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-06-16 09:28 PM

Still holding on to that love even though your lover's gone.....Sadly that happens a lot.
However, I appreciate how you presented this!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2002-06-16 10:25 PM

A sad tale of love and longing. I hope your heart heals and a special love comes your way.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-06-16 10:49 PM

it's difficult to let go of lost loves..but such is life, time repairs the loss in time..good write

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