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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-16 07:53 PM



Tilly Tuck Tuttle

~*Marge Tindal*~

Tilly Tuck Tuttle
wanted to cuddle
Aren't you glad I didn't rhyme Tuck ?
For if I did
surely it would be hid
in Adult where I'd run amuck~

Sometimes my mind gets ahead of my pen
and Oh, the trouble it gets me in !
So I'll be good
like I know I should
writing saccharin stuff so silly
you'd swear that I rhymed Tilly
Just forget about Tuck
cause it's my luck
Goody-TwoShoes would decide
that perhaps I should reside
in the Moderator Forum
until my decorum
was decidedly rectified
Then Tilly Tuck Tuttle
would be in a muddle
trying to cuddle
my rhyme~



*Once upon a silly-sung rhyme
my thoughts ran rampant
in three-quarter time
I couldn't reign 'em
Couldn't contain 'em
Now they stampede
like they have a need
to be goofy most of the time*



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-06-16 07:56 PM


*chucklin and thankin ya for the smile Margie Girl*  Hugs to ya.

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-06-16 07:58 PM


LMAO This is too funny.
ethome
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3 posted 2002-06-16 09:04 PM


Marge!
He he I'll Tilly Tuttle Tuck this away in the back of my mind
While you Tilly Tuck Tuttle it all along the internet......Cute Marge!   Real cute!

SmartChick
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4 posted 2002-06-16 09:11 PM


LOL! I like this, Marge! Very funny!
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5 posted 2002-06-16 10:13 PM


You better watch your Tilly Tuck Tuttle
Or you'll get in trouble with a rebuttal
Don't go messing 'round with sweet little Tilly
Or you'll go to Adult because I'll slap you silly!

And you better listen and don't press your luck
By trying to write about old Friar Tuck.
If your pen gets frisky sometimes now and then
The mods will be sure you are placed in the pen!

And if you still feel a little contrary
Then there is no doubt you'll be in solitary.
My eyes are on you, girl, hope you understood
I'll be watching and guess what?...you look mighty good!

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-06-16 10:18 PM


Marge,
Can't out speed balladeer, enjoyed.

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7 posted 2002-06-16 11:09 PM


Marge:  Sounds like you'd better keep those naughty thoughts under control or else!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-06-17 12:42 PM


ROFL, Marge...

I love your new silly writing slant
laughed so hard, I almost wet my pants



~ chuckling real hard hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-06-17 09:41 AM


GentleSpirit~
Lordy, Lordy ... don't know what possessed me !

Julie~
Every now and again ... my pen just gets the *giggles*

ETHome~
Laughing at your 'word re-arrangement' ...
LOVE IT ~

SuzieQuzie~
Glad to give you a chuckle ... thankee gal~

Balladeer~
Listen here
I've had enough of your Squad !
You're behaving like a Mod !
I 'knew' this one would call your name
you're so EASY ... it's a shame~

I'm not allowed into Adult
Silly Tilly or not
So if you want to see me
you'll have to read what I got~

The muses find it amusing
to play with a little ink
And sometimes they get downright and dirty
saying what I think !

Who knows why these things come to be
You reckon there's another poet in me ?
Laughing at the indignity
of 'sweet little poet' ME ?

I'm a 'little' wary
of 'solitary'
Don't want to be anywhere on my own
Not to fear ...
I'm sure  Deer~
You'd never leave me alone !!!

Seymour~
LOL .... and to think ...
HE's YOUR NEIGHBOR !
Want to relocate to Central Florida ?

BettyLou~
But .... but ....
They're just having FUN !!
Honest Injun !

Lyra~
Quit laughing so hard
or I'll have to send
A full case of
DEPENDS !

*Lest one thinks I've been 'spanked'
.... NOT !(yet !)
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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10 posted 2002-06-17 10:58 AM


Marge,
Poems sometimes show how a poets mind works and with some like me how it does not work sometimes.  I love the humor of this side of your mind......but I have not seen a side I did not like very much.  You have a multi-track mind and use all of them.

Dan....grinning and shaking my head.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-06-17 02:21 PM


OhDan~
What a sweet reply~
Sometimes I think I'm all tilly'd up~
Then someone like you happens along
and convinces me it's all in my tuttle
Then I breath a fresh tuck of inspiration~

Thank you for riding the train all the way to the end of the line~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2002-06-17 05:19 PM



Mmmm if you would've rhymed on Tuck
You would've been left a sitting duck
But you didn't and that's your luck
And I just love your Tilly Tuttle Tuck

you always manage to make me laugh when I need it kiddo!!!

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

devina
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13 posted 2002-06-17 05:38 PM


ROFLMAO@you Miss Margie...

too cute for words you are!!!

...and you're welcome in adult N-E-Time you know!!??? *EG

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2002-06-17 05:53 PM


Titia~
I sure hope to spread a smile or two gal~
LOVE your little rhymed reply~
We are truly gonna have such fun come September~

Devina~
Tickled that you got a *giggle* out of my silliness~
It isn't that I wouldn't feel 'welcomed' ...
it's just .... well ... let's just say, my Mama wouldn't let me !
Shucks ... I don't even 'lurk'~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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Mark Bohannan
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15 posted 2002-06-17 06:45 PM


Osiyo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So do you honestly think I am going to reply to this in one of my rhymes on my first day back??????  I do so see the margins and boundaries that would be set before me and I believe you know by now how that would taste on my tongue let alone my pen.  Let's just say, VERY cute and it's so nice to find a hearty chuckle when you need it most.  


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16 posted 2002-06-17 06:57 PM


Oh,MarkB~
All silliness aside ... you just 'knew' I'd need you, didn't you ?
Gv ge yuhi~
As in 'WAHOO'~

Look >>>>>
I have missed your buns ... big time !!!
*HUGS*
~*WillowWhiteFeather*~

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17 posted 2002-06-20 09:13 AM


Tilly Tuck Tuttle
wanted to cuddle
Aren't you glad I didn't rhyme Tuck ?

I swore I wouldn't giggle at the title (I'm not easy, yanno! LOL) but I lost all sense of dignity by the time I'd finished reading these 3 lines. *G* ROFLMAO, gal... you pulled laughter out of the hat with this one. *G*

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18 posted 2002-06-20 10:06 AM


Marge

I think you have more than one poet in you...maybe less then 100, maybe not.  This one certainly has a twinkle, gave me one too!


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19 posted 2002-06-20 10:09 AM



smiling here...

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20 posted 2002-06-24 05:21 PM


I'm laughing so hard I really don't know what to say~!  Marge, surely your muses are out of control!  LOL  
Love it!
Hugs
Cindi

Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2002-06-24 08:16 PM


SuthernGal~
Now you've got me *giggling* with your reply, just knowing you were out of control with your laughter ! (and I just THOUGHT it was thunder !)

Martie~
Give that girl a medal ... you nailed it chicky~
Shame on one of them !

Karilea~
*smiles* back at ya' ...

Cindi~
Hey ... thanks for laughing hard enough to kick this one back to my attention ... I missed those replies above~
Now I owe ya' one gal~

Hey ... 'tween you, me and the fencepost ...
those muses have ALWAYS been out of control~
Just sometimes they clean up nicely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2005-07-29 01:42 PM



Yep ... this is just one of those days that I needed to *tickle* myself~

Ahem ... a little decorum in the forum, puhleeze~


Actually, I was looking for something else ... and chanced upon this little silly dilly~

Don't mind me ... nobody else does~
*Huglets*
~*Marge-At-Large*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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