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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-06-16 04:14 PM


Thank You Daddy



My Daddy and me, when I was a bit over a year old

Thank you Daddy for being there
thank you for calming my childhood fears
for all of the bedtime stories you read
and for chasing the monsters from under my bed

thanks for all of the deep talks we shared
and always showing how much you cared
for guiding me through my childish ordeals
with compassion and love, you taught me to feel

a shining example of how to live
how to laugh
how to cry
how to love
how to give

for bearing with me through teenage years
and your shoulder, on which I shed some tears
though you've been gone for so many years
your presence remains, beside me...near

through life's tribulations and angished trials
I remember your hug and the warmth of your smile
with vivid recall, your voice...your face
a life well lived, a model of grace

and one more thing, Daddy...
its because of you
that I love poetry, as I do
thanks again Daddy...I'll forever love you





Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (06-16-2002 09:05 PM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-06-16 04:22 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Lyra, you always have so much love to share and give, sweet friend, I know you have always made your dad so very proud and he will always love you and he will always smile every time he read sthe lovely words you write as we all do! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-06-16 04:56 PM


Lyra~
Softly touching the tender in me on this day~
Lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2002-06-16 04:57 PM



Yep...our Dads were something else...
I'm smiling with this one, Lyra....
but I think you know that...

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-06-16 04:57 PM


Very nice words of appreciation...James
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-06-17 05:40 AM


look at those cheeks, Lyra *s...
I love those black and white pictures..
someday I may even put one of my own up...
lovely poem, and if he is the one who  "gave" you your love of poetry, then
he gave us all a special gift.

Thanks for sharing
hugss
M

Kethry
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6 posted 2002-06-17 07:59 AM


Lyra, what a magnificent tribute and I love the piccies.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-06-17 08:05 AM


Lyra,
He did a wonderful job.

SmartChick
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8 posted 2002-06-17 09:37 AM


Lyra, this is a beautiful poem for your dad. Dads are so special.
Martie
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9 posted 2002-06-17 09:49 AM


Lyra

A lovely tribute!  He must have been a great guy...look what a wonderful daughter he grew.  Hugs, you!

Toerag
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10 posted 2002-06-17 10:38 AM


Big time poetry from a gal with a big time heart....wish my dad was here so I could show him a great father's day....
RosePetal
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11 posted 2002-06-17 10:44 AM


awww very touching poem my friend!
You have a heart of gold ((hugs))
Dad's are awesome..im still daddy's little girl

TeaBag
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12 posted 2002-06-17 11:19 AM


I think that this was a great poem and a wonderful contribution to your dad.

-S

SadSong
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13 posted 2002-06-17 11:25 AM


Hello!

I enjoyed this special tribute to your dad Lady Chipmunk, it was a beautifully written poem. I think I am going to enjoy this place.

[This message has been edited by SadSong (06-17-2002 11:28 AM).]

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14 posted 2002-06-17 03:17 PM


wonderfully done my friend. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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15 posted 2002-06-17 03:58 PM


Dear Dad of a special lady..

Thank you for all that you have given her.
For...by so doing...you have given us all
of her special qualities...which she so
graciously shares with us...

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16 posted 2002-06-18 12:04 PM


Daddy's girl here..big tears..and big smiles. I loved this poignant trace of your love for him. Hugs to you poetess.

Sincerely,
Reg

Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-06-18 12:39 PM


Thanks so much, Noah...
My Dad died in 88, but I know that he continues to inspire my poetic musings...
He is the one who taught me to love poetry.

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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18 posted 2002-06-18 12:45 PM


Marge...
I thank you for reading my poem and for your warm reply.

~ warm hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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19 posted 2002-06-18 12:47 PM


Thanks so much, Karilea...
and I loved your poem about your Dad and the photos also...
I know how much you must miss him because I miss my Dad an awful lot.

~ nostalgic hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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20 posted 2002-06-18 12:48 PM


Thanks so much for liking my poem, James...

~ Father's Day hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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21 posted 2002-06-18 12:50 PM


Maureen...thanks so much, that was a very sweet reply...
I have always had the cheeks...I guess thats because I'm a chipmunk.

Please please please let us see one of your baby pictures...I bet you were darling...
and you still are.

~ loving hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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22 posted 2002-06-18 12:51 PM


Thanks so much, Keth...I think the pic's are such a nice addition to a poem...
I just couldn't resist this one...it just fit with the poem too perfectly.

~ hugs from the top of the world

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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23 posted 2002-06-18 12:55 PM


Thanks so much, Sy...
Somehow, I think he knows that.

~ Happy Father's Day hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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24 posted 2002-06-18 12:57 PM


Thanks so much, Sue...I hope you got your computer going okay...
David is going to email you because he hasn't heard back from you.

~ lots of hugs all the way from Michigan

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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25 posted 2002-06-18 01:00 PM


Thanks so much, Martie... for the reply and for the compliment which made my head swell.

~ head swollen with pride hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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26 posted 2002-06-18 01:02 PM


Thanks so much, Mr.Toe...I wish my Dad were here also...He died in 88, and I miss him terribly.

~ Happy Father's Day hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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27 posted 2002-06-18 01:04 PM


Thanks so much, Joanna...
You are right...Dads are awesome...
I will never forget my Dad...

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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28 posted 2002-06-18 01:09 PM


Thanks so much Tbag...
I still miss him terribly...

~ sad hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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29 posted 2002-06-18 01:11 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Sad Song...
I know you will love it here, and I am looking forward to reading your work.

If I haven't already done so,  I would like to welcome you to Passions.

~ welcoming hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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30 posted 2002-06-18 01:12 PM


Sven...thanks so much for reading my poem and for replying to it...

~ Happy Father's Day hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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31 posted 2002-06-18 01:14 PM


Barry....thank you so much for that lovely little verse for my Dad...
You are just too much!!!!!
Here goes my head....swelling again!

;Supergrin: ~ Happy Father's Day hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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32 posted 2002-06-18 01:17 PM


Thank you so much, Reg...
I think our best poetry is written right from the heart....just writing down our feelings.
I notice that sometimes I just write and think I have written gibberish and then the next day, I take a look at it...and with a couple of minor modifications...it becomes a poem.
Such was the case with this one...

~ thanking you hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Titia Geertman
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33 posted 2002-06-18 06:08 PM


Well as usual I'm late again. It's the sheep's fault I'd say!

This is really a lovely tribute to your father Lyra, thanks for sharing him with us.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Madame Chipmunk
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34 posted 2002-06-18 06:19 PM


Thanks so much, Titia...
How are your sheep doing?

~ sheepish hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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35 posted 2002-06-18 06:31 PM


A very nice tribute and a very nice Poem - Paul
Madame Chipmunk
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36 posted 2002-06-18 07:37 PM


Thanks so much. Paul...I don't know whether or not you are a father...but just in case, I will wish you a belated Happy Father's Day

~ Father's Day hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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