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still your girl (for Dad)
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still your girl (for Dad) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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This one is for all the dreams-- all the sting I've yet to sing. All the things you never saw-- all the things I never was... I wish I could be everything, that you saw within my eyes-- I wish I could be every thing! (all of me, contained in smile) I felt your reach of slow dance love I danced upon your feet in trust-- I miss the waltz of jubilee-- I pray to find some "you" in me... I will die your little girl I miss you. miss you, miss you, miss you...twirl... I love you, Dad. I am your girl. (I miss you Dad.) I miss our world... (as I catch a flamed baton) I do it, just to carry on... high-stepped pride in grasp of wand-- I'll do it. I will carry on. [This message has been edited by serenity (06-17-2002 01:59 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity A delight to read, but then you always are.  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sweet and heartwrenching You wrecked me. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wish I could be everything, that you saw within my eyes-- I wish I could be every thing! (all of me, contained in smile) ====================================== dont you see baby...you ARE all those things..see yourself thru his eyes... unconditional love allows us to be all those things. heart-hugs me twin love you mothyme You ... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen I see the tears in this yet they stand proud, like bliss just touched by human truth I watch and feel the ache with you  |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Serenity, this is just beyond beautiful! I love this! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gosh Karen, what is today.....break out the tissues day? Cause I am sure using them up left and right... Thanx ... and BTW... You are that girl! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have avery loving and golden heart and I know deep down your dad will always love you so so much and will always be so proud of you as you continue on and follow your dreams! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! That's beautiful Karen. You have carried on and I just know you are more than he ever expected! Love the tenderness of this.....I'm glad you're still daddy's little girl! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, there is something so special about a father/daughter relationship.. I know where you are coming from here... and you are that girl! You will always be...daddy's little girl. Beautifully expressed. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ya know Karen, I was gonna write a poem for my dad who watches from above, but this is among the many times that I can say I truly believe you wrote it far better than I ever could have. Missing them causes such an ache sometimes, and I thank you for this from the bottom of my heart. Hugs to you! I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
(as I catch a flamed baton) I do it, just to carry on... high-stepped pride in grasp of wand-- Karen, this is so very special...I can feel the tears between the words. He would have loved this. ~ sad sniffly hugsLyra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Now if this didn’t bring a smile from heaven, I don’t know what could. You know he’s up there replying “you’ll ALWAYS be daddy’s girl”. Love this piece Karen. Everything is possible in the game of life |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Today was hard. I thank you, m'friends, for being here...I love you. (and Gentle Spirit? WRITE THE POEM.  *HUGS*)[This message has been edited by serenity (06-17-2002 02:11 AM).] |
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