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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-06-16 09:49 AM



Come!  See!  Enchantment, Free!

See the mystical in this day
Rainbows colored oh! So gay!
See enchantment all around
Find all frowns turned upside down

Stand on heads in sheer amaze
There! into eyes of copper glaze
Find swift magic in one’s dream
And swiftly then upon sun’s beam

Capture this bit of elfin whim
In all delight upon tree’s limb
Swing and swirl in mystery
To find one’s self transported free

Here! Here, the summer’s fine
Better than old winter’s mind
Here the summer’s ringing free
Come! Come sing, and dance, with me.


     

PhotoArt - K. R. Jungel
RiverFestival 2002


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-16-2002 09:51 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-16 09:58 AM


Karilea~
Delightfully spritely~

Did you do the adorable art piece ?
WOW !!!
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2002-06-16 10:17 AM


Ok...what dance?  Polka,  Waltz,  Hip Hop,
Beep Bop? Huhhhh?  Or maybe just stand and
shuffle feet like two teenagers afraid to
dance?

Love the art....and WELCOME BACK!!!!!!

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3 posted 2002-06-16 10:56 AM


Hi Karilea, my friend...I want to be the one bearfoot twirling on the hardwood floor.  This poem is gorgeous!!  Photo too!
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YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...you are the lucky recipient of having the first post I comment too after getting home from vacation because I knew you must have had a ball at the River Festival and I wanted to see the inspiration you got! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I see I have missed much here (362 starting posts in Ope #21 already, OH MY!!!) LOL! I love it, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shie upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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5 posted 2002-06-16 12:43 PM


Karilea...Well, this enchanted piece just picked my spirits up
and danced them round the moon and back!
Magical indeed...wish I could have been there!
~Hugs~

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6 posted 2002-06-16 01:28 PM


I want to come and dance and sing .....Please can I?!?

This poem made me do this...

"Find all frowns turned upside down"

You're making me happy with this one!

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7 posted 2002-06-16 03:10 PM


makes me wanna dance, and hon trust me, I haven't felt like dancin in days!!  wonderful delightful and just so uplifting.  Hugs and THANKS

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


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8 posted 2002-06-16 06:23 PM


This is so very cute, Karilea...and I love the photo-art also...
The whole piece is just so very uplifting!

~ welcome back hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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9 posted 2002-06-19 03:31 PM


Sounds good to me. *G* In fact, considering that I'm in the clutches of the werk monster, it sounds delightful! LOL This is lovely, Sunshine... both poem and pic!
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10 posted 2002-06-19 03:40 PM


Damn! I thought I was gonna see Enchantress nekkid for free....oh well, wasn't disappointed with the poem though...
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11 posted 2002-06-19 04:30 PM


magical words and enchanting art - thanks for a great poet and for the invitation to this magic experience - Paul
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12 posted 2002-06-19 07:38 PM


Sha boom, sha boom, ladadadadada, sha boom, sha boom, ladadadadadada - I feel the vibes all the way up here.     Sheer delight!

There is nothing means more to me than
my faith, my family and my friends.

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