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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2002-06-15 05:25 PM






White Moon glowing down
upon Winter's frozen moors...

Let the spirit of the White Eagle
waft towards my snow-drop tears.
Winged interludes of snow-dust
raining down upon my yearning heart.
Let me feel the throb
of your gleaming, white soul
pressed against the throb of my own.
See the pale, White Moon
glowing in iridescence
through the sultry, ebon night.

There my thoughts go
soaring upwards
letting the Moon lead me
through the steps
of its divine, white dance.



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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-06-15 06:03 PM


Very nice Ivy...James
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2 posted 2002-06-15 06:14 PM


IvyRose~
Beautifully serene and refreshing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-06-15 09:10 PM


Wonderfully written Ivy

Cold hands means a warm heart

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4 posted 2002-06-15 09:13 PM


Gosh Ivy...what would we do if our planet
did not have a moon to write about in
poetry as divine as this....Huh????

Goodknight
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5 posted 2002-06-15 09:23 PM


Very nice word and verse to ponder the moon's return after this stormy night.  I liked the poem lots!
Marilyn
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6 posted 2002-06-15 09:52 PM


A lovely read. The imagery pulls you in and you can see this unfold before your eyes. Well done.
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