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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-06-15 01:46 PM

Of many colors

I saw rainbows in my
eyes

I felt your    heart
weaving  my   soul
releasing   me into  your
   naked thoughts

letting     go
my words laying  upon
your skin   in  soft
color

Like the first night
we danced
   under the willow tree
breathing the night
  in shadows and moonlight

I swear   I saw stars
  fall from   your eyes
your 'heaven   blue eyes'

Together on the oceans edge
   we spoke   lightly of the
waves lessons,   how earth
moves in mystery

I once tried to write
about you
in unwept words  but
rain, and water,   on sand,
wash    the lines away

   in distant echoing swells
of how we came to be

For J’
With my Love Always’

Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-15 02:06 PM

Beautiful!!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-06-15 02:14 PM

I swear   I saw stars
  fall from   your eyes
your 'heaven   blue eyes'

I know this feeling, Lauren...
Sometimes, when I look at David...his eyes just seem to weep stars...

This is a lovely poem and it sounds like you are in love.....

~ hugs for a rosy future

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-06-15 02:15 PM

Lauren,
A soft lovely reminisce. Enjoyed the read.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-06-15 02:23 PM

One could bask in these memories for all of
time...

Beautifully painted..

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-06-15 02:43 PM

I seem to like each one better than the last. Your writing is so beautiful.
Sadra

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-06-15 04:15 PM

Dang it girl!
Your writing is giving me goosebumps!
This is SO amazingly beautiful!
Keep on writing...
~Hugs YOU!~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2002-06-15 04:20 PM

Lauren, each one even more beautiful than the last. Lovely words from a lovely soul.

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-15-2002 07:03 PM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2002-06-15 06:01 PM

Like the first night
we danced
   under the willow tree
breathing the night
  in shadows and moonlight

I swear   I saw stars
  fall from   your eyes
your 'heaven   blue eyes'

Together on the oceans edge
   we spoke   lightly of the
waves lessons,   how earth
moves in mystery

I once tried to write
about you
in unwept words  but
rain, and water,   on sand,
wash    the lines away

   in distant echoing swells
of how we came to be
==============================

oh my....oh my oh my...
words whispered upon wings of butterfly!

I once tried to write
about you
in unwept words

dont I know baby...dont I know..........

when I need the words and my own fail me...
you write them across my heart.....
thank you for that sweet L

mothyme

You ...
You are still a whisper on my lips ...
A feeling at my fingertips.

DV

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-06-15 06:32 PM

GreenEyes~
Doesn't get more beautiful than these lovely thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

10 posted 2002-06-15 07:13 PM

beautiful......
~~ Connie ~~

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2002-06-16 02:34 PM

Lauren, this is so inspiring, and so beautuful! It's a keeper for sure, this is one of your best and the painting compliments your words perfectly

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-06-16 02:42 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you sound like you're soooooo happy and I wish this true happiness to shine forever in your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

13 posted 2002-06-16 04:33 PM

Very nice and invited me to ponder the many colors of any relationship - thanks - I liked reading your poem lots - Paul

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2002-06-16 04:34 PM

Lauren...I was going to offer you a map, but I see you've found the way...

Excellent...

Cherokee Child
Junior Member

since 2002-05-29

Posts 13

15 posted 2002-06-21 07:34 PM

Lauren, mom was right when she said your heart is beautiful.

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

16 posted 2002-06-21 07:36 PM

1DERFUL!!!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

17 posted 2002-06-22 06:55 PM

Hello Lauren

This was simply stunning and so much enjoyed.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

18 posted 2002-06-22 09:54 PM

"Oz never gave the Tin man anything he did'nt allready have".

paladin

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

19 posted 2002-06-22 09:58 PM

I once tried to write
about you
in unwept words  but
rain, and water,   on sand,
wash    the lines away

   in distant echoing swells
of how we came to be

I swear I saw stars fall from your eyes~

Oh man, aren't you something else Lauren!
What a treasure your words are~

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

20 posted 2002-06-24 12:09 PM

Greeneyes, this is a keeper for sure! I especially so loved the lines BluesSerenade just highlighted.

Wow!

mycafe

[This message has been edited by mycafe (06-24-2002 12:14 AM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

21 posted 2002-06-24 01:57 AM

Lauren,
He is one lucky guy...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

22 posted 2002-06-25 11:19 AM

Lauren, this is beautiful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

23 posted 2002-06-25 04:46 PM

from only the one kind of heart that could write this. . .

beautiful my friend. . .

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