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Tim
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0 posted 2002-06-15 12:33 PM


I got a dog, his name is Spot,
But a spot, Ol' Spot ain't got,
Spot's black as night, without no moon,
And Spot is crazy as a loon.
Ol' Spot, he thinks that he's a rock,
So I took him to a doggy doc,
The doggy doc done probed and checked,
Then he done tol' me, I suspect,
Ol' Spot ain't loco, from some strange planet,
Spot just thinks, you take him for granite.

© Copyright 2002 Tim - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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1 posted 2002-06-15 12:43 PM


I was looking forward to Spot with spots but this does fine..got a smile from me


the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-06-15 01:30 PM


I am smiling and laughing my head off.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-06-15 03:13 PM


Tim~
LOL-ing at you~

Think this one might get you ten to life !
(unless you know a judge up close and personal)
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Nan
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4 posted 2002-06-15 06:06 PM


...Spot ROCKS...

Martie
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5 posted 2002-06-15 06:26 PM


Tim

Doggy psychology is the newest thing...This was really a cute reminder that to love is to be loved.

Zinsser
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6 posted 2002-06-15 07:15 PM


I love this.... very cute....
  
Nan   I love your dog thing  LOL  how cute is that
~~ Connie ~~

Kethry
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7 posted 2002-06-15 08:16 PM


I love this. You'n'me could be spotting our dawgs together. I would never take you for granite
Keth.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Marilyn
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8 posted 2002-06-15 09:32 PM


LOL..I loved this. Poor ol' Spot needs some attention.
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9 posted 2002-06-19 11:27 AM


ROFL... I love this!!! *G*
wayoutwalt
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10 posted 2002-06-19 11:53 AM


this was a ruff read!!
Denise
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11 posted 2002-06-19 01:33 PM


HaHa HeeHee Hilarious, Tim!
Sunshine
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12 posted 2002-06-19 02:19 PM



What's worse...now I can't get the SONG out of my head...

my3monkeytoes
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13 posted 2002-06-19 02:26 PM


Yuk Yuk Yuk....too funny!
Toerag
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14 posted 2002-06-19 02:56 PM


Tim....I write poetry like this too....I'm enjoying my stay here at Crayola Country Institute....do you have any aqua colored crayons?...I ran out yesterday....wanna draw a picture of a lake and a boat and sail away for the weekend...what ya think?....Loved the poem spot, granited, I think you belong here...but still liked the poem...sincerely, Franklin Delano Roosevelt..

[This message has been edited by Toerag (06-19-2002 02:57 PM).]

Pilgrimage
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15 posted 2002-06-19 04:03 PM


I love this one!


Nan

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