Twixt Dark and Dawn's First Light...

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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-06-15 10:14 AM

Do you know the special time,
just before the dawn,
When parents sleep and children dream
of fairies on the lawn?
As dark and light in silence meld,
at start of night's retreat,
And creatures of the day await,
pink blush of sun's first greet.
What if one could stand cacooned
within that special time?
Forces of both night and day
enwrapped in joy's sublime,
Within the fields elysium,
no fear of shadow's bite,
Without the pain of searing sun,
on wings of angel's flight,
But, alas, comes forth the day,
with passing of the night,
And special time's of joys sublime,
are lost to day's first light.

[This message has been edited by Tim (06-15-2002 12:49 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-06-15 10:24 AM

love this......
*s
M

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-06-15 10:33 AM

This is stunning Tim and so captures the time between dark and dawn.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

3 posted 2002-06-15 12:11 PM

Very beautiful and expressive! A fine piece of poetry this is!

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-06-16 05:09 PM

...Yes!...

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-16 05:19 PM

What a lovely peaceful feel to this. Of course, I know those kind of moments can happen in the waking hours...but the edge of fantasy that can occur in the dream world is a lovely moment to ponder. Enjoyed this poem immensely!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-06-16 07:31 PM

OhTim~
This is incredible~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2002-06-16 10:48 PM

*sigh*

perfect.

I love this time of day, especially when you are by the water.

exceptional.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2002-06-16 10:54 PM

Soft peaceful images! Nicely done!!

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

9 posted 2002-06-16 10:55 PM

it makes me smile.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Alicia
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since 2002-03-22

Posts 279

10 posted 2002-06-16 11:51 PM

~Can't believe I found this,...I just love it! -- That secret, precious time between the two, you've captured it wonderfully,...you've stirred in me the rushings of it all, the wonder and magic of this world. Thank you. *Peace.

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