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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-06-15 06:23 AM

Criss Crossing Reveries

No wonder he’s behind
My words he just read
He is playing catch up
I’m always a day ahead

Heart texture brightens
In threading ones way
A silver moon weaves
To the gold of the day

Better  late than never
It had often been said
I was spinning dreams
He  picks up my thread

Upon every silken trail
Uplifted we transcend
Criss crossing reveries
Day and nights blend

Hope ©2002

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-06-15 07:18 AM

Sounds like you're hard to catch up to!
This is very nice. Love the last verse!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-06-15 08:13 AM

HopeS,
This is a poem in itself.
"I was spinning dreams
He picks up my thread"
Delightful read.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-06-15 10:55 AM

Hope, you are not only a day ahead, you are also head and shoulders of poets of note.
Excellent write
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2002-06-15 11:28 AM

Thanks for your reply ethome ,
being at the other side of the world can often make thing difficult
Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2002-06-15 11:29 AM

Thank you Seymour , you give me equally sweet replies
Hope

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2002-06-15 11:31 AM

Hey thanks Kethry ,you saying I'm head and shoulders , hahaha I am only 5ft 2 , but I truly thank you ,
being that you are also Australian you will know what I mean about the days ahead
Hope

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-06-17 06:48 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! Yes, better late than never, and if I wasn't on vacation, I would of always tried to be the first one to comment to all your lovely poems as always! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely with a fabulous message, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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