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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There is beat to jungle drums maddening of rock's despair-- motion of my conundrum-- pendulum in slice--beware... There is moment of undone-- there is presence everywhere. A jungle is a forest kept-- it's privacy of weep of mind; fertilized by those long dead-- watered tears of "left behind." there are moments--I cry "dread." They leave shadow play of mind. Silence is a heart's regret. Silence sings of what may yet-- silence is the note of pause before the note--silence--applause One still note's parentheses-- poignant by silence of me. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
We've got to stop meeting like this! What will your fiance say!!! Oh but I can't help myself..... "Silence is a heart's regret. Silence sings of what may yet-- silence is the note of pause before the note--silence--applause One still note's parentheses-- poignant by silence of me." My what clever little philosophies you come up with in the wee hours of the morning! Silence would be my heart's regret. Nice touch southern belle! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
grin...more to the point? what WON'T my fiance' say? and laughing, I keep HIM wondering myself! but? I did think of you with this one, knowing you know music...there is a "point" to timing, isn't there?  and the "rests"? act as part of time signature...I know ya know...I've heard YOUR music in my mind! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yep I know! |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
"silence is the note of pause before the note--silence--applause" that's such a cool beat. it pays to get up early (or stay up this late in my case) and catch the late night creativity. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A jungle is a forest kept-- it's privacy of weep of mind; fertilized by those long dead-- watered tears of "left behind." VERY excellent writing, Karen...  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karen, you've got the music in you and your silence is...golden. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SerenitySweetie, muaah on cheekz dearPoetFriend4this fantastic poem you've shared with us here... It's ALWAYS a treat2read your poety... *~coco~* |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
silence with a rhythm. I like this poem very much serenity  mycafe |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A jungle is a forest kept-- it's privacy of weep of mind; fertilized by those long dead-- watered tears of "left behind." there are moments--I cry "dread." They leave shadow play of mind. Silence is a heart's regret. Silence sings of what may yet-- silence is the note of pause before the note--silence--applause ...and the metronome waves. Shall I respond? Or be silent. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Silence is a heart's regret. Silence sings of what may yet-- silence is the note of pause before the note--silence--applause This was a class act~ Beautiful writing serenity~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Arrrrgh! Publish already! At least, send a book to me. She said burn ... together. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"One still note's parentheses-- poignant by silence of me." Silence, is like negative space in art, it speaks as loud as the color and line. I enjoyed this you song. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Silence is a heart's regret. Silence sings of what may yet-- silence is the note of pause before the note--silence--applause"  BRAVO!!! Oh Karen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, silence is indeed still yet is poignat and it is almost like a river that has to be instigated, telling us of what will follow next that we have to prepare for! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and loght always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-23-2002 08:14 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Came in to thank you all--yer all so kind to me that I wanted to express my appreciation...and MIKE? publish? HA! I was just told in another forum TO GET A JOB! *chuckling* Thanks guys... (serenity exits, pondering the implications of MONEY...) |
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