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0 posted 2002-06-15 01:09 AM



The time has come to say goodbye
to the people most influential.
They've been there for me in my most difficult times,
they've seen the tears I've cried.
As I journey to this new part of life, I ask them only one thing:
That they keep in touch and don't let me go
Because I want them there at the end.
Just to say adios to my teachers and friends who have been there for the past six years I've lived in 100 Mile. I'm finally going to college and leaving them in peace

© Copyright 2002 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2002-06-15 01:15 AM


I wish you the best at college and I know they'll all be there for you always!!
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2 posted 2002-06-15 01:22 AM


good luck, it is hard to part with the people who have been there to help you through lifes little twists and turns
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3 posted 2002-06-15 03:34 AM


Believe it or not? You are NOT leaving them, but on your way to DISCOVERING them...

*secret smiles to you*

with hugs

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4 posted 2002-07-06 01:46 AM



Rhonda-
This is a wonderful way to say 'thank you' to
those influential people.
Good luck to you in college!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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5 posted 2002-07-06 03:44 AM


good luck out there
and always value your memories
enjoyed

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

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