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Gray Gifting Dawn
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Gray Gifting Dawn |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Gray Gifting Dawn ~*Marge Tindal*~ Out across gray gifting dawn there came a sloop of poetic song Whispering thoughts in full regale drifting into billowed sails~ Silence-in-tow on indigo sea sextant searching port-of-call of me Compass now in needle's fluctuate quilling verse in soul's relate~ Herald now the voyager's sojourn On calming waters ... new poetry was born~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Silence-in-tow on indigo sea sextant searching port-of-call of me Compass now in needle's fluctuate quilling verse in soul's relate~ A lovely poem, Marge...I could feel the rhythm of the sea as I read it.  ~ sailing hugsLyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 I love thisCold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hard to beat poetry on the seas...Could write a book of poetry lying under the stars...rocking slowly with the seas gently caressing the ship....Watch out, you have got me thinking now... Nicely done Marge! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You haven't missed yet.  |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Being an ex-sailor, I can really feel the surge of the sea and the wind in my face! Great poem! Betty Lou Hebert |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good morning Marge! I've experienced this feeling and you describe it so well here. For such a large giant that's so powerful it can be so soft and peaceful sometimes!! Well done poet lady! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie darling sister of my soul and healer of the night, this is one of your finest writes ever you manage to clothe in words the ethereal feeling of thought, and no one does it better. I love this it is as are all yours fabulous. This is particularly fine in it’s haunting images I love it utterly utterly Absolutely perfect flow, truly this is excellent writing, yes I utterly utterly love it. First class writing darling heart   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lyra~ Thank you dear ... it came as a soft wave~ Julie~ Thank you~ Magnus~ Glad I could 'rock your inspire boat'~  Thanks fella~ Seymour~ Awwwwwww ! Come September ... I'm just gonna *hug* your neck BIG TIME !!!  BettyLou~ As so often happens ... the title came in a soft whisper ... and I had to figure out where it wanted to go .... I'm happy to know you felt the surge~ ETHome~ I think the sea has the power to either sink us ... or drive us into peaceful waters~ I love the ride~ Thank you dear poet~ MarshaLove~ You send me seaward with a sail full of sweet comments~ Thank you dearest lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
You have revived my craving for the ocean, Marge. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your poem and Hoot's "Passion's Quest" should be sailing side by side. *S* This is lovely, Marge. *S* |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
It would be nice to hear you read this aloud like waves lapping against the hull... more, please... Élan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge Soft and quiet lovely! Hugs! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Out across gray gifting dawn there came a sloop of poetic song Whispering thoughts in full regale drifting into billowed sails~ Silence-in-tow on indigo sea sextant searching port-of-call of me Compass now in needle's fluctuate quilling verse in soul's relate~ ================================= Classic Marge-poetry..rhyme divine and always the prettiest poetic phrasing... even slipped in some alliterations. Lovely turn of phrase and metaphor. mothyme "It's not about having what you want ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ElfinTigress~ Thank you so much for the sweet reply~ VanDana~ Thanks bunches, hon~ SuthernGal~ ... this one just whispered it's way through the fog~You're a sweetie~ Elan~ How did you 'know' ... I often read them aloud ... and thank you so much~ Martie~ One of those 'early-morning' thoughts ... quietly seeking an audience with me~ Thank you hon~ JanetMarie~ So good to see you sweetie~ I'm always glad to know you've read me~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I can now experience this every night (again) and rest assured, there will be many that I do. As always, a treat to read your soft words in MARGE scale. Yigaquu osaniyu adanvto adadoligi nigohilvi nasquv utloyasdi nihi dadasquanigisgv!! Maga |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Thank you, sweet *gifting* man~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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